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Imaginary Friend

My daughter said her friend was Lee; I smiled but only saw our Jo, who skipped and laughed and climbed a tree. I wondered would you see him though, and was he only lost on me? In some dimension I don't know, perhaps that boy is clear to see... written 21st June for Regina's Make Believe contest

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Date: 7/13/2020 11:30:00 AM
Jack what a win, clever humerous poem. Congratulations on your very deserved win - children seem to see dimensions far clearer and more often than adults. Well penned my friend, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/10/2020 7:51:00 PM
Creative work. Reads a great chance for winning. Sara
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Date: 6/30/2020 1:21:00 AM
So clever is this poetry, jack love it..
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Date: 6/29/2020 2:38:00 PM
Witty, beautifully written and with a lot of wisdom. A big big congratulations! Well deserved.
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Date: 6/28/2020 3:12:00 PM
Way to win the contest, Jack. I had a feeling I would not be on this list with you! Congrats , my friend.
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Date: 6/28/2020 9:22:00 AM
Your muse is really creative and thought provoking Jack. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/28/2020 5:33:00 AM
Lovely and Congrats! Thanks for entering. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 6/28/2020 1:59:00 AM
Jack, a nice make believe friend. Congrats on this sweet little muse win. Mohan
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Date: 6/27/2020 1:58:00 PM
That is a cute poem. Never did have an imaginary friend but then with 3 brothers and a sister I never needed one. Hope all is well Jack. love phyl
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Date: 6/21/2020 3:39:00 PM
This is really good, Jack. Imaginary friends are the very best; they never telltale and keep secrets like nobody else does! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/21/2020 3:25:00 PM
oh how charming jack I can imagine an only child having an imaginary friend. your poem is so lovely:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/21/2020 3:07:00 PM
A really fine entry for the contest Jack. Good luck. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Reminds me of my imaginary friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/21/2020 2:39:00 PM
this is a cool entry, Jack. I need to come up with something for this contest and all I can think to do is imagine myself as a famous person!!
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