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I'M Void

I shouldn't be here today, my plans got derailed. So now I sit, eat and do nothing. I'm a huge void. People talk, I smile and I say yes I'm doing good. All the while I want to say screw you and leave me alone. I feel like a baby now, being watched over, people scared to even let me pee But when this started, when the signs were there, no one cared.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2015 3:59:00 PM

Hi Laura, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/16/2015 2:03:00 PM

Laura, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT