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I'M the Eagle Owl -Revised

Note to sponsor: (just noticed one word was "off" in a repeated line)

My orange eyes are blazing. Better scram!
Fast and dangerous, I’m the eagle owl.
My wing span is six feet; how grand I am!
Here I come; here I come – the owl most “fowl!”

Fast and dangerous, I’m the eagle owl.
With my sharp talons out, I come for you.
Here I come; here I come – the owl most “fowl.”
Too late you’ve heard my call: ooh-hu; ooh-hu!

With my sharp talons out, I come for you.
My wing span is six feet; how grand I am!
Too late you’ve heard my call: ooh-hu; ooh-hu!
My orange eyes are blazing. Better scram!

Gif #1 chosen
May 7, 2020 for Eve Roper's Pantoum Rhyme - Personification Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 5/9/2020 10:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea , in the pantoum rhyme and personification contest. Great job with the theme you decided to choose. I have picked this photo 3 different times in the past to write about, it just fascinates me. Thank you for your participating in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/9/2020 6:01:00 PM
Dropping by again to wish you congratulations on your win, my friend!
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Date: 5/7/2020 9:51:00 PM
It is quite intense ... like the owl. You know I don't think I paid much attention to the eye color of an owl until now (very odd considering it's my favorite color). Best of luck in the contest, Andrea ...
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Date: 5/7/2020 5:37:00 PM
Hello Andrea. owls hunt at night. They have very good eyes. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice evening my fiend.
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Date: 5/7/2020 4:21:00 PM
Ah, you picked such a majestic bird to write about, winning wishes dear heart.xo
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Date: 5/7/2020 4:11:00 PM
I didn't have you figured as such a predator! I learn something new every time I read your writings, haha! Fun pun on the owl most fowl. Great job and GL in the contest, friend ~ John
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Date: 5/7/2020 2:26:00 PM
very descriptive - kind of scary to see this coming at you, for sure, LOL
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Date: 5/7/2020 2:15:00 PM
Well written Andrea, not my favourite form. Good luck Tom
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Date: 5/7/2020 2:14:00 PM
Very dynamic in sights and sounds of reality in the photo. Well done Andrea. A winning poem you wrote.
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Date: 5/7/2020 2:02:00 PM
Very clever, like a little drama! I like the way you have made that attack sound real ominous for the prey! Andrea, all the best in the contest.9
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Date: 5/7/2020 1:34:00 PM
Very well done pantoum, Andrea. Looks like you won't be going hungry anytime soon! GL in the contest...
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Date: 5/7/2020 1:13:00 PM
I love it when they snatch a rat! Aloha! Rico
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