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I wanted, to touch you in a way that melts your soul, but you pulled away I wanted, to be your shelter to protect you from the storm, but you invited the rain I wanted, to be your desire, all your fantasies untold, but you allowed yourself to stray I wanted, to be your protector to keep you safe from harm, but you pushed me aside I wanted, to be all that you've been looking for but you never unlocked the door I wanted, to make you see, you can be anything you want to be, but you just couldn't hear me I wanted, to pick you up and carry you through all the struggles and all the pain but you laughed at the thought I wanted, to show you that I'm stronger than you think but you closed your eyes I wanted, to provide anything that you needed but you denied me once again, I wanted, to talk to you about the future we could hold but you turned on the radio, to try to tune me out I wanted, to love you with such a passion so fierce and so true, but you said with so much anger I deserve better than you, I wanted, to make you see what I see when I'm looking at you, but you broke the mirror what can I do? I wanted, to write you a beautiful love letter but the words wouldn't rhyme and it, wouldn't touch you the way I'd want it to I wanted, to sing you a song that would make you cry inside yourself but you wouldn't listen, because the wall you've built around yourself is almost impossible to climb, I'd like to try...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/16/2014 7:00:00 AM
woow so well written held me all the way through
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Date: 1/25/2009 11:29:00 AM
So sad to have such deep feelings for someone and never able to express them. I love the way its written Ty. loveudo Laurie
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Date: 1/24/2009 5:10:00 AM
Tyesha - This poem is so clear in its message and written so beautifully - Until recently I never made a favorite poet's list but I decided to and after reading this poem you will be on it - You are very gifted and this poem reminds me of my wife - She did all those things for me so i can say through personal experience that he should stop acting a fool and embrace the rose (That would be you hon) before it slips away - good morning and God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/23/2009 8:10:00 PM
this poem is beatifully writting. It packed with an emotional drive that really drew me in. well penned love and peace james
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Date: 1/22/2009 5:12:00 PM
i don't copy many poems to take home, but this one touched me in such a sweet way. thank you. John H. Loving III
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Date: 1/22/2009 3:57:00 PM
This is a beatfully written poem. The emotion is displayed so perfectly. his really touches my heart. I know I felt this way. You never forget that feeling. Lovely and touching. Love, Robin
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Date: 1/22/2009 3:09:00 PM
And, it is sincerely good to see "God" has sent another blessed "Light of His" into the lions den here~Smile~So, "Have A Beautiful Day Dear 'Child of God'~Love & Warmth To You & All You Love Always, John!"~Bye Tyesha:)
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Date: 1/22/2009 3:06:00 PM
Smile~So very creative, true and beautiful! "Hello Blessed & Gifted Tyesha!"~What a wonderful story of faith which You penned here dear lady....I do not know why? But I kept thinking of the radio station called K-LOV when I was reading this blessed write of Yours! Perhaps because I saw something contemporary within it, in regards to other Christian writings which I have often viewed over time at this place here....Smile....I really like that!~{cont}
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Date: 1/22/2009 1:52:00 PM
Nicely done Tyesha. Your feelings - strong and hurt - are clearly stated. Watch the tense in the poem. Be consistent. Either present or past tense so that it's either: I wanted...but you pulled away or I want...but you pull away
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