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I'M Sorry, Goodbye

When I first saw you In the clearing late October Your smile echoing in my hollow heart It wasn't the first time I saw you But the first I had truly seen Your essence What makes you truly you It was in that clearing that misty October I realised you and me Weren't made to last The rain poured down as my tears did With no trees to guard my soul There and then in that clearing I knew I'd have to let you go

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/26/2023 5:46:00 AM

Congrats! Your first posted poem is a winner. God bless you.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/25/2023 8:02:00 PM

"There and then in that clearing I knew I'd have to let you go" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/25/2023 7:25:00 AM

Hello Kiara. Congratulations on your win. :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/22/2023 9:38:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.