Kiara De Poet Free verse

I'M Sorry, Goodbye

When I first saw you 
In the clearing late October
Your smile echoing in my hollow heart
It wasn't the first time I saw you
But the first I had truly seen
Your essence
What makes you truly you
It was in that clearing that misty October
I realised you and me 
Weren't made to last
The rain poured down as my tears did
With no trees to guard my soul
There and then in that clearing I knew
I'd have to let you go

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Beata Agustin February 26, 2023 at 5:46 AM Congrats! Your first posted poem is a winner. God bless you.

Christuraj Alex February 25, 2023 at 8:02 PM "There and then in that clearing I knew I'd have to let you go" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler February 25, 2023 at 7:25 AM Hello Kiara. Congratulations on your win. :)

Beata Agustin February 22, 2023 at 9:38 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.