Sasha Marchlewski Poet Free verse

I'M So Tired

I’m so tired of being surrounded by people and still feeling alone
Seems to me there’s nothing left for me in this life
I cry my tears but can’t wash away my pain
I scream my frustrations out but still they remain

I’m so tired of your lack of love
Seems to me there’s nothing left for me in this mirage
I try to make you happy but there’s nothing I can do
I give all you ask and expect nothing in return

I’m so tired of the pain I feel inside
Seems to me that you never cared at all
If you never loved me then why don’t you go
If I’m not what you want then why keep me here

I’m so tired of this emptiness inside
Seems to me that I should move on
If this life I’ve given you is not what you want
If my body no longer gives you what you need

I’m so tired of the hatred you make me feel for myself
Seems to me I’d be better off alone
This is who I am and you should love me that way
This is all I have to offer and it should be more than enough

I’m so tire of it all
Seems there’s nothing left to say
Good bye my sweet love I’ll leave a kiss on your cheek
Good bye my memories the few that I have

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Gert W. Knop September 7, 2010 at 1:57 PM Great write, Sasha! I belive nearly all of us have experienced that what you described so emotional! And thank you for your comment on "Words". I haven't been on Soup lately but posted two new poems tonight...keep your creative pen flowing and have agreat week!...Gert

Sarah Hales August 27, 2010 at 9:01 AM wow you just described my world that i have just realeased myself from read i close the door from my list xxx i understand what you write and what you feel sarah x a friend if in need x

Wilma Neels August 27, 2010 at 4:51 AM A great way of admitting that you have had enough.. quite an emotional write Sasha.. hope you will enjoy your day ~ Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 26, 2010 at 8:39 AM A very creative and emotional write Sasha.. enjoyed your brilliant words today.. with luv..

Poet Destroyer A August 26, 2010 at 7:25 AM wow! Sasha, you sure let all them bad emotions out in a very devestating way. Glad you had the courage to give up that usless hurt, loved your poem...LeeAnn

Harry Horsman August 26, 2010 at 6:32 AM a lot of sadness here, keep looking for happiness, i'm sure you'll find it. this is a well written poem, you have talent. Harry

Katherine Stella August 26, 2010 at 6:15 AM Sometimes you just got to let go and start anew thats what me doing but me still have foot in door I learned memories only makes ya stronger and turns ya into old wise owl enjoyed your read and hope its fictional also thanks for your kind comment on my tana poem keep up the great writing