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I'M So Tired

I’m so tired of being surrounded by people and still feeling alone Seems to me there’s nothing left for me in this life I cry my tears but can’t wash away my pain I scream my frustrations out but still they remain I’m so tired of your lack of love Seems to me there’s nothing left for me in this mirage I try to make you happy but there’s nothing I can do I give all you ask and expect nothing in return I’m so tired of the pain I feel inside Seems to me that you never cared at all If you never loved me then why don’t you go If I’m not what you want then why keep me here I’m so tired of this emptiness inside Seems to me that I should move on If this life I’ve given you is not what you want If my body no longer gives you what you need I’m so tired of the hatred you make me feel for myself Seems to me I’d be better off alone This is who I am and you should love me that way This is all I have to offer and it should be more than enough I’m so tire of it all Seems there’s nothing left to say Good bye my sweet love I’ll leave a kiss on your cheek Good bye my memories the few that I have

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/7/2010 1:57:00 PM
Great write, Sasha! I belive nearly all of us have experienced that what you described so emotional! And thank you for your comment on "Words". I haven't been on Soup lately but posted two new poems tonight...keep your creative pen flowing and have agreat week!...Gert
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Date: 8/27/2010 9:01:00 AM
wow you just described my world that i have just realeased myself from read i close the door from my list xxx i understand what you write and what you feel sarah x a friend if in need x
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Date: 8/27/2010 4:51:00 AM
A great way of admitting that you have had enough.. quite an emotional write Sasha.. hope you will enjoy your day ~ Wilma
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Date: 8/26/2010 8:39:00 AM
A very creative and emotional write Sasha.. enjoyed your brilliant words today.. with luv..
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Date: 8/26/2010 7:25:00 AM
wow! Sasha, you sure let all them bad emotions out in a very devestating way. Glad you had the courage to give up that usless hurt, loved your poem...LeeAnn
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Date: 8/26/2010 6:32:00 AM
a lot of sadness here, keep looking for happiness, i'm sure you'll find it. this is a well written poem, you have talent. Harry
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Date: 8/26/2010 6:15:00 AM
Sometimes you just got to let go and start anew thats what me doing but me still have foot in door I learned memories only makes ya stronger and turns ya into old wise owl enjoyed your read and hope its fictional also thanks for your kind comment on my tana poem keep up the great writing
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