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I'M Okay, You'Re Okay Is a Mask In the Land of Pretend Contest

I'm okay, you're okay is a mask Please do not ask In the land of pretend Lies will not end How far can you go With the faux show Shadow dance at play Chanting "I'm okay" Whisper creates trance Akin to necromance Own up, break the spell Outrun death knell Life behind mask is not living Toxic reality is unforgiving Embrace what and who you are Trust in self, you will go far

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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/27/2023 11:56:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write with a great ending. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/27/2023 11:59:00 AM
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Thank you Paula, you too x
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/26/2023 6:55:00 PM
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I like the simplicity of this poem that you wrote, and congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/26/2023 10:47:00 PM
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Many thanks Miranda - so pleased you liked it and thank you for my placement x
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 10/14/2023 4:22:00 AM
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Superb, this flows so well, love the use of shorter lines:)
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/14/2023 1:31:00 PM
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Thanks Jo, just keeping my hand in with the contests. Glad you like it x

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