I’m Not in Missouri Anymore

I stepped off the bus just before midnight. The thermometer read 38 degrees, but I had never felt colder. Loneliness has a way of draining the warmth from your heart. The 400-year-old stone buildings were gray and naked as they bleached through the fog covered courtyard. Like ancient tombs guarded by skeleton trees. A window slid open on the third floor of the building across the street from me. “Hey ‘cruit, welcome to hell,” they yelled. But I couldn’t laugh. I was too busy holding back the tears that were boiling up inside me.

                                    I was but a child
                            at the crossroads of my life;
                                   looking for a sign
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rolland Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:17 PM
i wouldn't have laugh either, a very moving poem, Thanks Jerry
Sands Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 10:37 AM
Very powerful.poem. well written Jerry :)
Greenhough Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 7:51 AM
This is a well described story of a traumatic memory. I felt the ending of a life situation, but the beginning of a new start. It is a very cerebral poem.
Wolf Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 7:33 PM
Gripping prose and poetry, Jerry. You want to borrow a 'Get-Out-of-Hell-Free' card? I have a few extra. Just call me: 1-800-FIRE
One Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 10:06 AM
You described the scenery and emotions you felt really well in your haibun.. The prose and the haiku are very good..
M  Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 9:20 AM
Oh how very sad Jerry! Debx
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