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I’m looking forward to letting my bare feet sink in silt the waves weighing me down salt sea leaving me breathless I’m looking forward to the sun bleaching my hair heating my arms, legs, scalp and the coconut scent of sunscreen I’m looking forward to sand between my toes shifting, drifting, flipping and coating my shins I’m looking forward to the playful splashing of the sea watching kids make moats & build and destroy sandcastles I’m looking forward to looking over my shoulder for alligators and snapping turtles on the loose, near every canal I’m looking forward to the tropical sips and eats the lightning that strikes right in front of my vehicle I’m looking forward to Florida highs and lows The Mean Girls musical My grand in the lead 2/22/2023

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Date: 2/28/2023 5:16:00 PM
Oh man I wish I had this to look forward to! If someone had just said Florida I would be like ...eh. But the way you've described it makes anyone want to visit! Lovely Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2023 5:40:00 PM
Thank you, FJ!
Date: 2/26/2023 1:00:00 PM
Kim, this is very creative and entertaining! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 5:49:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 2/23/2023 10:33:00 AM
enjoyable read and kinda funny too with reference to those canals....in Florida, I actually feel safer in the sea and would not dare swim in the fresh waters! lol..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2023 11:06:00 AM
I agree with you!
Date: 2/23/2023 5:45:00 AM
Delightfully daydreaming, invoking revelry...enjoyed the happy tone, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2023 5:52:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
Date: 2/23/2023 2:19:00 AM
I bet you are Kim…sounds delightful! Debx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2023 5:45:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 2/22/2023 11:15:00 PM
May all wishes come true. Careful of the alligators though. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2023 5:45:00 AM
Thanks…lol
Date: 2/22/2023 8:57:00 PM
They are all such pleasant things most of us love to see and have. Life offers so many such things to look forward to. But I am afraid of alligators and snapping turtles let loose . Sweet poem dear Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2023 9:17:00 PM
Right?! Me too! Thank you, sweet poet!
Date: 2/22/2023 7:05:00 PM
Gosh, what great stuff to look forward to. Counting the days yet?!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2023 8:02:00 PM
Yes!
Date: 2/22/2023 4:18:00 PM
Charming read. Enjoyed every word. Lots to look forward to. I am always one foot in the present, and the other forward into the future. Even do that with writing, get another idea before I am finished with the first, often with more than one in the process. Intriguing poetry. Thank you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2023 4:39:00 PM
Yup…like an artist with words…canvasses all wet!

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