Get Your Premium Membership

I'm Just So Passive

I’M JUST SO PASSIVE Trolling all the restaurants and the takeaways on the high street Whiffing all the smells of the cooking, but: never stopping to eat Then it is off down to the local pub, to whiff the barmaid’s apron Mind: our barmaid wears a beard and goes by the name of Jason After having myself a few passive pints, its off out for a cigarette And whiffing and snuggling in the corner with the feisty brunette “Yes” I am just a professional passive whiffer of all things so nice My favourite being; a chicken vindaloo curry with, spiced pilau rice Indiana Shaw . . . ; )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment
Date: 11/23/2019 7:14:00 AM
hahaha a professional passive whiffer...
Login to Reply
Date: 11/23/2019 6:26:00 AM
"Professional passive whiffer" is quite funny. You seem to have a unique sense of humour in your poems. Love that. Really enjoyed this :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/23/2019 12:09:00 AM
Oh those moments of casual pampering we all need at times ... Brought a kind of passive indulgence .... Nicely put...
Login to Reply