Im Here

Opening my eyes to the sunlight
I'm reminded of your sweet face
The look you give me resembles your love
But your eyes pierce through me so quizzically
Like your not sure if your alone

I'm screaming to you
I'M HERE! DONT GO!
though you can't possibly hear me 
through the loud actions that I make known

As the light fades and I close my eyes for the day
I loose my breath as I feel your touch
Manly and firm yet so loving and gentle
But your arms once ment to embrace me
Now fall to your sides in frustration
Your touch that once happened so freely now feels constrained

I'm screaming to you
I'M HERE!! DON'T GO!!
Though you can't possibly hear me
though the loud actions I make known

Slipping into my dreams so effortlessly
I see you just ahead of me
I scream to you
I'M HERE! DON'T GO!
you hear me this time
You turn to face me , arms stretched out wide
I run to you...you stand your ground
I reach you but you turn away from me
I fall to my knees as you walk off
I''m left screaming to you
I'M HERE! DON'T GO!
Though you can't possibly believe me
Through the loud actions I make known.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/22/2017 6:49:00 PM
Hard to read, but so poignant. Welcome to PS.
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Date: 4/21/2017 7:52:00 AM
Such a sad poem, and the repetition here makes it even more desperate. Well written Free Verse. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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