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I'M Going Under

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              Crack 
 
       Across my head 
               with
         ball and chain

              Down
       i’m going under

Awkwardly I sit and muse

              does 
               she
              laugh

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/31/2009 7:31:00 AM

sweet write-charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/28/2009 8:01:00 AM

So the old "ball and chain" flexes her muscle again! Tell her to be nice or your Soup friends will hunt her down. LOL Love, carolyn

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/28/2009 5:56:00 AM

I am laughing ... that is a funny way to go out, bro. Nice write.