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I'M Finally There

In passion's heat, two souls intertwine invoking a miracle divine. And before the first beat of my heart when there was no me, life got its start. Weightless, tethered to my world within sensations of existence begin. And as reassuring thoughts persist there's pleasure in knowing I exist. Protected within my inner space my growth develops at a fast pace. But I'm still we and want to be free anxious to leave; I need to be me. My eyes gaze in a bewildered stare as my empty lungs expand with air. And instinctively, I start to weep, but a loving voice sings me to sleep. The soothing sounds of a lullaby calm me down till I no longer cry. And reassured by my mother's care I've made it; I am finally there! (Rhyme) 8/4/2017

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Date: 3/18/2018 9:54:00 PM
Lovely. Very well penned, Emile.
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Date: 3/19/2018 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/4/2017 3:18:00 PM
so precious is this time when we bring new life into the world... astonishingly divine, emile.. huggs
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Date: 8/4/2017 3:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Nette, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/4/2017 3:17:00 PM
Well done! Finally There!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/4/2017 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Vijay, your comments are welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/4/2017 3:07:00 PM
- The most beautiful moment in life - Beautifully written, Emile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/4/2017 3:48:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.

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