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I'M Amazed

Sweetie I'm amazed as words roll off your lips Like the sweetest of honey I long for a sip Sweetie I'm amazed by the way that you walk That lovely movement as I watch your hips rock Sweetie I'm amazed by the way that you think Nothing compares to this satisfying drink Sweetie I'm amazed that you love me so much I'm electrified by your passionate touch Sweetie I'm amazed that you're part of my life All my dreams came true when you became my wife Sweetie I'm amazed by the ways you have grown Together we harvest the love we have sewn Sweetie I'm amazed I'm such a lucky guy You're my valentine the apple of my eye Written February 14th, 2013

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Robin Davis

Date: 3/23/2014 11:13:00 AM

Richard Such a wonderfully, sweet, charming, loving and sincere write. The love in your heart is so inspiring for this lucky lady. Thanks for the awesome and flattering comment on my Abuse poem. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/23/2014 12:37:00 PM

You are most welcome Robin.

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/18/2013 6:20:00 AM

Congrats on your place, Richard...an excellent poem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/18/2013 7:16:00 AM

Thanks Caleb

Donna Jones

Date: 3/17/2013 10:00:00 AM

Congrats on your win Richard...Donna

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/17/2013 10:14:00 AM

Thanks Donna

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/16/2013 8:33:00 PM

Amazing! Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce

Ray Dillard

Date: 3/16/2013 2:06:00 PM

A romantic I see!! A very nice tribute to the love of your life! Betcha you gotta big kiss for this one! Ray

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/16/2013 1:21:00 PM

Richard congratulation on your win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2013 12:43:00 PM

Richard, CONGRATULATIONS in Deb's contest!!! ;-) always~ PD

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/16/2013 9:26:00 AM

This is such a love song for the lucky lady in your life!! Her heart must be huge with such affection! Congratulations on your winning poem, Richard!!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/19/2013 8:53:00 PM

Hi Richard; sorry I have not been around much. i had to take two trips. I've had too much on my plate. This is a beautiful poem for your wife. Thanks for sharing it with us. Lucilla

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 2/16/2013 10:23:00 AM

Incredible you! This unique flow... So simple and easy; the most elegant and heartfelt love poem I've ever read! Very french style; I hope it's for a contest!? A winning gem anyway, in a contest or not...Love, Hanitra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2013 12:41:00 PM

Thanks, I have entered in a contest. I also gave it to my sweetie for valentines.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2013 2:54:00 PM

Ahhh!! Such romantic couplets..I know that special lady was proud to get this for her Valentine..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was very uplifting..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2013 4:13:00 PM

Thanks Sara, I always appreciate your visits.

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 2/15/2013 8:42:00 AM

I'm amazed in how you interprate your romantic side into this wonderful poem really enjoyed my reading tonight Rick :D - hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2013 12:45:00 PM

Good night Yanny, thanks for the hug.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/15/2013 5:57:00 AM

Lovely, Richard. Simply lovely! What an awesome gift...better than any monetary one!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2013 7:27:00 AM

Thanks Eileen!

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 2/15/2013 1:39:00 AM

This is a sweet love poem. These two lines just rocked and floored me: "All my dreams came true when you became my wife. Together we harvest the love we have sewn" . Awesome.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2013 7:28:00 AM

Thanks ndaba

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/14/2013 9:33:00 PM

I hope you delivered it.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2013 7:29:00 AM

Yep

Tim Ryerson

Date: 2/14/2013 4:58:00 PM

I can see this little gem in a Valentine's card to your wife, Richard...very nice and romantic write - Tim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2013 5:17:00 PM

Thanks Tim, she received it this morning.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/14/2013 3:29:00 PM

One lucky woman. Thanks so much for reading my work. Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2013 4:38:00 PM

My pleasure Debbie.

David Williams

Date: 2/14/2013 11:51:00 AM

Richard you romantic...David

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2013 4:39:00 PM

Thanks so much David.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2013 10:27:00 AM

Sweet love, Richard - you are lucky to have each other - Happy Valentine's day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2013 4:41:00 PM

Happy Valentines to you as well Anne-Lise.

Seren Roberts

Date: 2/14/2013 10:24:00 AM

I'm amazed how great this poem is. Well done Richard.....Seren

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2013 4:42:00 PM

Cute play on words. thanks for stopping by to read and comment

Donna Jones

Date: 2/14/2013 9:53:00 AM

Wonderful......and what a luckiest sweetie!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2013 10:04:00 AM

Thanks Donna.

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/14/2013 9:52:00 AM

This is another beautiful write coming from your ever talented quill! I loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a meaningful piece you have written here Richard! Great Work!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2013 10:05:00 AM

Thanks Russell

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/14/2013 9:10:00 AM

this is lovely Richard, so sincere and heartfelt... and a wonder for valentines day...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2013 10:05:00 AM

Thanks Harry

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 2/14/2013 9:07:00 AM

Once again, congrats for an amazing write....what more would your valentine ask for...god bless...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2013 10:06:00 AM

God bless you as well.