Richard Lamoureux Poet Couplet

I'M Amazed

Sweetie I'm amazed as words roll off your lips
Like the sweetest of honey I long for a sip

Sweetie I'm amazed by the way that you walk
That lovely movement as I watch your hips rock

Sweetie I'm amazed by the way that you think
Nothing compares to this satisfying drink

Sweetie I'm amazed that you love me so much
I'm electrified by your passionate touch

Sweetie I'm amazed that you're part of my life
All my dreams came true when you became my wife

Sweetie I'm amazed by the ways you have grown
Together we harvest the love we have sewn

Sweetie I'm amazed I'm such a lucky guy
You're  my valentine the apple of my eye

Written February 14th, 2013

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Robin Davis March 23, 2014 at 11:13 AM Richard Such a wonderfully, sweet, charming, loving and sincere write. The love in your heart is so inspiring for this lucky lady. Thanks for the awesome and flattering comment on my Abuse poem. Hugs Richard Lamoureux March 23, 2014 at 12:37 PM You are most welcome Robin.

Painted Hunter March 18, 2013 at 6:20 AM Congrats on your place, Richard...an excellent poem. Richard Lamoureux March 18, 2013 at 7:16 AM Thanks Caleb

Donna Jones March 17, 2013 at 10:00 AM Congrats on your win Richard...Donna Richard Lamoureux March 17, 2013 at 10:14 AM Thanks Donna

Joyce Johnson March 16, 2013 at 8:33 PM Amazing! Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce

Ray Dillard March 16, 2013 at 2:06 PM A romantic I see!! A very nice tribute to the love of your life! Betcha you gotta big kiss for this one! Ray

Connie Gildersleeve March 16, 2013 at 1:21 PM Richard congratulation on your win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A March 16, 2013 at 12:43 PM Richard, CONGRATULATIONS in Deb's contest!!! ;-) always~ PD

Carrie Richards March 16, 2013 at 9:26 AM This is such a love song for the lucky lady in your life!! Her heart must be huge with such affection! Congratulations on your winning poem, Richard!!

Lucilla Carrillo February 19, 2013 at 8:53 PM Hi Richard; sorry I have not been around much. i had to take two trips. I've had too much on my plate. This is a beautiful poem for your wife. Thanks for sharing it with us. Lucilla

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday February 16, 2013 at 10:23 AM Incredible you! This unique flow... So simple and easy; the most elegant and heartfelt love poem I've ever read! Very french style; I hope it's for a contest!? A winning gem anyway, in a contest or not...Love, Hanitra Richard Lamoureux February 16, 2013 at 12:41 PM Thanks, I have entered in a contest. I also gave it to my sweetie for valentines.

Sara Kendrick February 15, 2013 at 2:54 PM Ahhh!! Such romantic couplets..I know that special lady was proud to get this for her Valentine..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was very uplifting..Sara Richard Lamoureux February 15, 2013 at 4:13 PM Thanks Sara, I always appreciate your visits.

Yanny Widjanarko February 15, 2013 at 8:42 AM I'm amazed in how you interprate your romantic side into this wonderful poem really enjoyed my reading tonight Rick :D - hug, yanny Richard Lamoureux February 15, 2013 at 12:45 PM Good night Yanny, thanks for the hug.

Eileen Manassian February 15, 2013 at 5:57 AM Lovely, Richard. Simply lovely! What an awesome gift...better than any monetary one! Richard Lamoureux February 15, 2013 at 7:27 AM Thanks Eileen!

Ndaba Sibanda February 15, 2013 at 1:39 AM This is a sweet love poem. These two lines just rocked and floored me: "All my dreams came true when you became my wife. Together we harvest the love we have sewn" . Awesome. Richard Lamoureux February 15, 2013 at 7:28 AM Thanks ndaba

John Loving Iii February 14, 2013 at 9:33 PM I hope you delivered it. Richard Lamoureux February 15, 2013 at 7:29 AM Yep

Tim Ryerson February 14, 2013 at 4:58 PM I can see this little gem in a Valentine's card to your wife, Richard...very nice and romantic write - Tim Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2013 at 5:17 PM Thanks Tim, she received it this morning.

Debbie Guzzi February 14, 2013 at 3:29 PM One lucky woman. Thanks so much for reading my work. Light & Love Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2013 at 4:38 PM My pleasure Debbie.

David Williams February 14, 2013 at 11:51 AM Richard you romantic...David Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2013 at 4:39 PM Thanks so much David.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2013 at 10:27 AM Sweet love, Richard - you are lucky to have each other - Happy Valentine's day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2013 at 4:41 PM Happy Valentines to you as well Anne-Lise.

Seren Roberts February 14, 2013 at 10:24 AM I'm amazed how great this poem is. Well done Richard.....Seren Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2013 at 4:42 PM Cute play on words. thanks for stopping by to read and comment

Donna Jones February 14, 2013 at 9:53 AM Wonderful......and what a luckiest sweetie! Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2013 at 10:04 AM Thanks Donna.

Russell Sivey February 14, 2013 at 9:52 AM This is another beautiful write coming from your ever talented quill! I loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a meaningful piece you have written here Richard! Great Work!! Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2013 at 10:05 AM Thanks Russell

Harry Horsman February 14, 2013 at 9:10 AM this is lovely Richard, so sincere and heartfelt... and a wonder for valentines day... Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2013 at 10:05 AM Thanks Harry

Mehnaz Veetil February 14, 2013 at 9:07 AM Once again, congrats for an amazing write....what more would your valentine ask for...god bless... Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2013 at 10:06 AM God bless you as well.