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I'M a Old Woman

Age is just a number True, this axiom proves Age, despite our thoughts When we were so young Is just that, a number… It doesn’t make us ancient It doesn’t make us pointless It doesn’t make us redundant Or reflect the silence of shadows Falling over the ones past forty Age is just a number, according to our birthday It means we’ve passed the tests, the trials That come to those who have lived and tried Those who have given this life their best efforts And know the meaning of a past… a past That holds the attempts of a heart who has lived Through sadness and pain, through fears and tears Through the years that make us experienced in living And – experienced in giving back to those who know We are older now, but so much wiser and surer. In our youth, we don’t understand What it means to have lived a life Seen the dawning of many more suns Than the ones who are still holding onto The belief that they’ll never see their way Past the prime where they believe That life is the very best, the charmed, the elite What they fail to see, until they’ve lived Through the years, past the tears and fears Into the hopes and dreams of the tomorrow… Is that life becomes better, more precious More cherished and respected, more valuable As the years peck away at the ego, the pride… Destroying the shadows that struggle inside There comes a calm, a peace, an abiding faith The humble assurance that His love, His grace His ways… are the only answers to our prayers The only way to find true life, a life of happiness A life that abides in the way, the truth, the life… The wonder of wonders – Jesus Christ! As I grow older and older, my spirit grows closer To the One who has taken me across this life With the assurance of Him by my side, my guide Past the wonders of youth, the years of truth And finally, now – into the wisdom of a maturity That only requires me to know that I know… The One who holds my heart and soul – the ONE Who holds my hand as – on and on I go Toward the moment when the end brings me To the only real beginning there is… with HIM Through eternity, forever praising! August 27, 2022
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Date: 9/27/2022 10:31:00 AM
A journey of faith through every phase of life so beautifully articulated in your poem, Gina! Congratulations on your win! Hugs and blessings to you dear friend! Thank you for sharing your life story.
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Date: 8/27/2022 12:17:00 PM
Totally and truly moving Gina. A poignant insight into aging. Linda
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