I'M a Defender In the Name of Love

I'M a DEFENDER in the NAME of LOVE Forlorn flavored winds speech of my love strokes the welcoming distance of eastern dawn where the somber colored night has withdrawn and pearls of hope; glitter clear like yolks, my fevered heart is bursting as I spoke seeing immaculate hues I foregone-- unto blossoms swelling red I hold on, while I await to resign slow my yoke. Why are we torn when just lips start to kiss and two sundered paths light one perfect bond? In changeless clamor, will we surrender? The purpose singing hard to gain, --- and missed. To troubled waves, no desolate respond, I'll be forever here, your defender. ________________________________________________ *** abba abba cde cde rhymes 6:10 pm, October 27, 2015

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Robert Lindley

Date: 11/15/2015 8:57:00 AM

Just found this fine sonnet you crafted. And I see it won in a contest--congrats !!!! A7

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/3/2015 6:58:00 PM

Congrad's Olive. Light & Love

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/1/2015 11:26:00 PM

Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Olive!

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/1/2015 5:08:00 PM

So beautiful, Olive. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Dan Cwiak

Date: 11/1/2015 3:00:00 AM

Kudos Olive, on this enchanting winner!

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/1/2015 2:41:00 AM

Olive,Congratulations on your 1st place win. :-)Alexis

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/9/2015 7:35:00 AM

thanks much ALexis.. =`)

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/29/2015 7:47:00 PM

Great double use of yoke...I love the ingenius way your "just lips" has a double meaning, and "in changless clamor will we surrender..." I interpret this pretty metaphysics as saying, are we to be slaves to the same excuses, are we to be ruined by recurrent doubts and fears. This poem makes me feel the woman I love, keeps me warm in loyal love Olive...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/12/2015 2:16:00 AM

thank you so much for your always generous comment Justin. =`) booster and mega encouragement.. =`)

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/29/2015 11:33:00 AM

Lovely sonnet, Olive. All the best! Such noble thoughts of a beloved in this write. hugs!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/10/2015 2:30:00 AM

thanks much KIm.. =`)

James Fraser

Date: 10/27/2015 3:56:00 PM

Beautifully written Sonnet Olive. A joy to read this October evening. It's sure to do well in the contest little one, hugs aplenty//James xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/29/2015 9:53:00 PM

One of my few tries in the form of a sonnet James, I hope I please that Sponsors muse anyhow its not, I am fine.. =`) I love this healthy exercise of my muse... =`) hugxxx~Olive Eloisa =`)