Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Sonnet

I'M a Defender In the Name of Love

I'M a DEFENDER in the NAME of LOVE


Forlorn flavored winds speech of my love strokes
the welcoming distance of eastern dawn
where the somber colored night has withdrawn
and pearls of hope; glitter clear like yolks,
my fevered heart is bursting as I spoke
seeing immaculate hues I foregone--
unto blossoms swelling red I hold on,
while I await to resign slow my yoke.
Why  are  we  torn when just lips  start  to  kiss
and two sundered paths  light one perfect bond?
In changeless clamor, will we surrender?
The purpose singing hard to gain, --- and missed.
To troubled waves, no desolate respond,
I'll be forever here, your defender.
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*** abba abba cde cde rhymes

6:10 pm, October 27, 2015

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Robert Lindley November 15, 2015 at 8:57 AM Just found this fine sonnet you crafted. And I see it won in a contest--congrats !!!! A7

Debbie Guzzi November 3, 2015 at 6:58 PM Congrad's Olive. Light & Love

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 1, 2015 at 11:26 PM Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Olive!

Sandra Haight November 1, 2015 at 5:08 PM So beautiful, Olive. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Dan Cwiak November 1, 2015 at 3:00 AM Kudos Olive, on this enchanting winner!

Alexis Y. November 1, 2015 at 2:41 AM Olive,Congratulations on your 1st place win. :-)Alexis Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 9, 2015 at 7:35 AM thanks much ALexis.. =`)

Justin Bordner October 29, 2015 at 7:47 PM Great double use of yoke...I love the ingenius way your "just lips" has a double meaning, and "in changless clamor will we surrender..." I interpret this pretty metaphysics as saying, are we to be slaves to the same excuses, are we to be ruined by recurrent doubts and fears. This poem makes me feel the woman I love, keeps me warm in loyal love Olive...J.A.B. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 12, 2015 at 2:16 AM thank you so much for your always generous comment Justin. =`) booster and mega encouragement.. =`)

Kp Nunez October 29, 2015 at 11:33 AM Lovely sonnet, Olive. All the best! Such noble thoughts of a beloved in this write. hugs! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 10, 2015 at 2:30 AM thanks much KIm.. =`)

James Fraser October 27, 2015 at 3:56 PM Beautifully written Sonnet Olive. A joy to read this October evening. It's sure to do well in the contest little one, hugs aplenty//James xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 29, 2015 at 9:53 PM One of my few tries in the form of a sonnet James, I hope I please that Sponsors muse anyhow its not, I am fine.. =`) I love this healthy exercise of my muse... =`) hugxxx~Olive Eloisa =`)

Michael Tor October 27, 2015 at 1:05 PM Exceptional write. Olive defending Love you do best. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 28, 2015 at 9:01 PM Michael thanks much for this comment.. =`)

Paul Callus October 27, 2015 at 12:08 PM A defender of love, but no sword or shield are needed. Lovely sonnet. gl if for the contest. Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 28, 2015 at 8:38 AM Paul, pen is mightier than sword.. =`) but anyhow more than it.. thanks much for the lovely drop by.. hugs back!~Olive Eloisa

Red Barchettadrive October 27, 2015 at 10:13 AM Beautiful sonnet!!! 7+ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 28, 2015 at 6:55 AM thanks much for the beautiful comment.. =`)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 27, 2015 at 7:46 AM What a beauty Olive! Superb rhyming, perfect 7 ! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 27, 2015 at 9:32 PM thank you so much Dr. Upma for this wonderful remark.. =`)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 27, 2015 at 7:46 AM What a beauty Olive! Superb rhyming, perfect 7 ! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 28, 2015 at 6:52 AM =`) thanks...