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Illusion

Rabbit out of hat                                                               Cards flowing from a full mouth                                          What an illusion 


Date Written:9/9/2021 

3 Place

''I'' Contest New or Old Poetry Contest                                 Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/20/2021 11:48:00 AM

This takes a bit of thinking, and then bam. It is right there. Nice one!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/22/2021 11:47:00 AM

Thanks for writing. It is an honor to have a win in this fun contest. Glad you like this fun write. How do they do it??? Yes, bam it is right in front of you. Have a blessed day................

Constance La France

Date: 9/15/2021 6:03:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/17/2021 11:14:00 AM

Thanks for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your fun contest. Glad you like my Illusion write. Cards and a rabbit make everyone laugh. Have a blessed day writing away....................

Paul Callus

Date: 9/12/2021 8:15:00 AM

I believe you are on the winners' list, Paula....and that is no illusion!! So ....congratulations! Warm regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/12/2021 11:21:00 AM

Thanks for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in this fun contest. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day................

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/11/2021 4:28:00 PM

A great piece, well penned, I can see that illusionist. Nicely done.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/12/2021 11:19:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you can see this one. It was a fun write. Have a blessed day..............

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/11/2021 5:53:00 AM

Yes, such an illusion fascinstes us often isn't it... Loved this Paula... Have a blessed lovely day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/11/2021 8:55:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you love this one. Have a blessed day/weekend..............

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/11/2021 12:12:00 AM

Sure is Paula, yes its visual, i like it.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/11/2021 8:54:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day/weekend..............

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/10/2021 2:48:00 PM

I get fascinated every time I see an illusionist do a trick,, guess its the little child in me Paula, that never died, thank you for sharing, have a great day :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/11/2021 8:52:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this illusion write. It would be nice if you knew how they do it. Have a blessed day/weekend......................

Judy Ball

Date: 9/10/2021 2:12:00 PM

You let the rabbit out of the hat, I let the cat out of the bag and now the rabbit and the cat are playing tag. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/11/2021 8:51:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this write. Thanks for the laugh with your rabbit and cat. So Cute. Have a blessed day/weekend......................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2021 8:38:00 AM

Creative work you have penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it today. Way to go. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/11/2021 8:49:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day/weekend......................

JCB Brul

Date: 9/9/2021 11:52:00 PM

Very entertaining write! love the image you made!!More power Paula..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/10/2021 7:51:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day......................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/9/2021 9:34:00 PM

You know I am missing out, have never seen a rabbit pulled out of a hat... nice one Paula...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/10/2021 7:50:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this write. Oh no, no rabbit from a hat. Maybe you can see it on your computer. Have a blessed day......................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/9/2021 7:43:00 PM

Love the magic trick!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/10/2021 7:48:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you love this fun/magic illusion write. Have a blessed day......................

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/9/2021 1:00:00 PM

Such an interesting haiku Paula, I love magicians and was drawn in. Happy Thursday!!