Illumination

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Dawn haze full overcast dark milieu Morn- Clouds dim, dull, atmosphere returning sun- Shine Warm loving golden hue ambient cue- Glow Dusk darkens worldly woes 'till the morrow's Morn

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K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 7/1/2009 2:12:00 PM

u glow only when you burn........still think you can`t afford to burn for life?

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/28/2009 4:40:00 PM

It always comes again! Fine work! Yours Matthew Anish

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/27/2009 9:53:00 PM

The promise is always for tomorrow ... but genius of the poem is now. Bravo! Thanks for your comment on my poems, and for honoring me your contest ... I am late in all this being 2 weeks away from the soup ... catching up on my reads ... thanks for the inspiration. One love, my friend.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/26/2009 5:46:00 PM

Deborah, Your analogy of weather to moods is good here. And isn't it funny how we can get through things during the day, but at night... T-H-O-U-G-H-T-S interrupt the glow of life. Nice job here. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 6/26/2009 6:18:00 AM

So sad, I was hoping the 4th verse would continue the awakened spirit element but instead reminds me of my own cyclical mood swings as I go from feeling all 'lightened and loving' to 'bitter annoyed' with my own worldly woes. These kind of remind me of rain drops now that I look at them...Take care Deb, thanks for the reality check:) -Yoni

Hana Ryusaka

Date: 6/25/2009 6:07:00 PM

Nicely done... Love the return to Morn in the last stanza. Thank you for all your encouraging comments, Deborah. =]

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/25/2009 4:15:00 PM

nice work but now isn't the time for praising the sun for me. john h lovingiii