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Illumination - TRI

Your music never fails to make the stars go dancing in the dark. The moon observes them wide awake, and floods of light stream down the park. The stars go dancing in the dark and paint the sky in silver dyes to sparkle and to mesmerize. The moon observes them wide awake. Then lightens up as if amused to see celestials diffused. And floods of light stream down the park. It's time for my heart to rejoice; it is the music of your voice.

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Date: 9/5/2024 1:59:00 PM
This is lovely with a blending of imagery and personification, Zainab, and the meter is quite good. Congrats on your top win. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/5/2024 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win for this amazing poem.
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Date: 9/4/2024 5:19:00 PM
Beautiful in form and theme. Nice job
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Date: 9/4/2024 8:37:00 AM
Oh very nice form! Congratulations on your top win! Xo
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Date: 9/2/2024 7:46:00 PM
Zainab, a huge CONGRATS on your first-place win in my contest. Such a descriptive, lovely poem! Janice
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