I'Ll Shush You Guys
There was a young mother from Maine
Whose children were really a pain.
They cared not a rap
That she needed a nap,
So she drove them all out in the rain.
Written around Deborah Guzzi's poem "Shshshsh ma is Sleeping" for her contest.
Sorry Deborah. No way would I try to correct your poetry. 9th place
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