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When captured in a heron’s beak An escape plan froggy did seek Frog croaked I’m no quitter I’ll strangle this critter The outcome for heron looked bleak! Quitters Never Win Poetry Contest Sponsored by Margarita Lillico 05/10/21

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Date: 6/20/2021 9:24:00 AM
Beautiful and funny poem. love it!
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Date: 6/16/2021 9:54:00 PM
EXCELLENT. Big Congrats to win Top. Hugs
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Date: 6/15/2021 12:28:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your wisdom blended with humor. God bless you.
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Date: 6/14/2021 8:25:00 PM
Delightful Limerick! Congrats on your top win, Jan!
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Date: 6/13/2021 10:39:00 PM
Wonderful limerick, Jan, clever and witty, congratulations:)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/14/2021 3:58:00 PM
thanks so much Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/13/2021 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun/cute write. Enjoy your win. Have a blessed day/week................
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:57:00 PM
thanks so much Paula:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/13/2021 7:27:00 PM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Jan. Janice
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:57:00 PM
thanks so much Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/31/2021 6:10:00 AM
I agree with your quote, Jan...although poor froggy had no alternative. I'm waiting for the heron's next move! Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:56:00 PM
thanks Paul so sorry for the delay in replying:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/21/2021 6:26:00 AM
Lol! Jan, The photo inspired you to write a hilarious limerick. That frog is not giving up no time soon. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:56:00 PM
thanks Alexis so sorry for the delay in replying:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/17/2021 4:01:00 AM
Kermit never quits
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:56:00 PM
he has a lot to live for with Miss piggy lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/13/2021 11:00:00 AM
Lol, Thanks for the chuckles Jan, soupmail
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:53:00 PM
thanks Joseph so sorry for the delay in replying:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/11/2021 6:34:00 PM
That bird won't have one heron his head by the time Froggy's finished! lol. Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:52:00 PM
thanks GW so sorry for the delay in replying:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/11/2021 12:29:00 PM
Heron do swallow headfirst, so your frog is quite clever not to try an inside job!
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:48:00 PM
lol thanks Rico:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/11/2021 12:17:00 PM
That purple eyed look of fear tells the story. You find the most convincing pictures for your poetry!
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:47:00 PM
thanks Jenna so sorry for the delay in replying:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/11/2021 11:32:00 AM
Love your take on this contest Jan. Really cute xxoo Happy Tuesday!
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:46:00 PM
thanks Mike so sorry for the delay in replying:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/11/2021 11:15:00 AM
As a lifelong angler, I’m convinced that that photograph is contrived. I’ve never seen a frog trying to eat a heron’s tonsils. A fun limerick, Jan. Good luck in contest. Terry
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:45:00 PM
lol Thanks Terry, so sorry for the delay in replying:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/11/2021 9:37:00 AM
This contest is tailor made for you Jan and you certainly don’t disappoint, it’s a great prompt picture, looks like curtains but that frog ain’t giving up, love it, cheers David
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:45:00 PM
thanks David so sorry for the delay in replying:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/11/2021 8:44:00 AM
That’s a superb Limerick for the contest, the picture is great too… Belle :-) x
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:33:00 PM
thanks Belle so sorry for the delay in replying:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/11/2021 5:51:00 AM
Excellent limerick, Kim. Janice
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:33:00 PM
thanks Janice so sorry for the delay in replying:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/11/2021 3:37:00 AM
- ... losers ... the strongest is the winner ... perfect picture, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/14/2021 3:33:00 PM
thanks Anne-Lise so sorry for the delay in replying:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/10/2021 10:43:00 PM
Loved your picture. Might strangle the heron.
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Date: 5/11/2021 12:06:00 AM
It was a wonderful prompt for the poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/10/2021 5:05:00 PM
So cute. just adorable. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/11/2021 12:07:00 AM
Thanks Regina:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/10/2021 2:36:00 PM
ha! very funny, jan, with a perfect picture to match! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 5/10/2021 3:38:00 PM
we had 2 pics to choose from for the contest, this one made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/10/2021 1:41:00 PM
Hi Jan - How adorable is this, very. Poor froggy. Yes, quitters never win. Even with wit and fun there is truth here. Best wishes always.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/10/2021 3:38:00 PM
thanks Lisa i loved the contest picture prompt:-) hugs jan xx