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SUSPICIOUS LIES (( collaboration * Rick Parise )) by~ RICK PARISE When jealousy is thrown out the door and compromise is welcomed in, it is then a novel of strewn pages empty and silent shall reap enraptured song For our love of bitter regrets and expectations shall fall with the setting sun And within that early morning light a new love shall rise victorious where promise endeavors and soft shadows lie by~ POET D. The guardian of our love has risen once again I share with you my love the sun and moon Two rivals as we hold hands The vigilantist in your eyes, will now kiss me softly Like a flower our new love will bloom Win or lose, you are the one I choose And within that midnight light our love will confuse no more promise will overcome insecurities faithfulness will soften all A Collaboration with *RICK PARISE ~MY COLLABORATION CONTEST~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/4/2016 10:58:00 PM
let me in
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Date: 11/25/2011 12:19:00 PM
* "This Is Exactly What I Had Mentioned The Other Day Unto Your Amazing Sweet Beauty * My Dear Indiscribably Beautiful Linda * Your Loveliness Paints The Entire Spectrum of Emotions Canvas Sooo Very Splendidly * I Love Soft Kisses & Petals In Bloom * My Luv, Always & Always * Sarah." *
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Date: 10/27/2011 10:16:00 AM
you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!
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Date: 8/19/2011 5:18:00 PM
Everytime I read one of ur poems, I get inspired...thank u
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Date: 8/12/2011 12:01:00 PM
Awww,,, this is sweet. I can feel LOVE inside your poem. Touche! :)
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Date: 8/3/2011 10:09:00 AM
yes I believe I read similar lines to Rick's poem before ..excellent with both of u on board with creating this brilliant beauty..good luck PD and Rick both BFF's to the "Sweetheart" luv..
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:32:00 PM
Awesome, simply put, awesome ! Great come back ! I had to read another one, lol...ok, Have a good night ! Much love, james
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Date: 7/26/2011 1:19:00 PM
Well crafted piece from you both, have enjoyed reading and wishing you all the best..Joe.
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Date: 7/25/2011 2:31:00 PM
liked it very much....real meaningful....thanks for liking my write......
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Date: 7/25/2011 11:34:00 AM
P.D. your lines is simple and meaningful! I enjoyed it! Good luck :)
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Date: 7/24/2011 4:49:00 PM
nicely done!! cory
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Date: 7/24/2011 12:32:00 AM
Fantistic job Destroyer and Rick-impressive!!!
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Date: 7/23/2011 10:50:00 PM
Love the poem- nicely penned both of you. love phyl
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Date: 7/23/2011 9:17:00 PM
my compliments to two minds that joined together, wrote this poem and it could'nt get much better. BRAVO
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Date: 7/23/2011 8:58:00 PM
Rick, if you read this ... i think i was having fun with your poem.... I truly enjoyed,, well i enjoyed all 3,, but i am working on a fast pace right now... making comments~ and working on 3 other collaborations right now.... enjoy this and tell me what you think,..p.d.
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Date: 7/23/2011 9:00:00 PM
ooo! and give me a title Rick,,, i had none to go with,..p.d.

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