Tim Smith Poet Free verse

I'Ll Leave the Window Open

Gentle breeze come my way
release your secrets held at bay
I'll leave the window open
even just a crack
in hopes your winds
ever slightly blow back
into my never ending dream

Gentle breeze set me free
carry my worries out to sea
I'll leave the window open
and pull back the curtains
in hopes her scent wafts
aimlessly upon my
storm tossed pillow

Gentle breeze bring me solace
guide her thoughts   flawless
in through my open window
float past doubts and apprehensions
into an inner sanctum
bringing a whole
to a fractured soul

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CayCay Godwin September 7, 2016 at 10:34 AM How I love this! You described feelings / thoughts I've had regarding the touch of breezes in ways I have not succeeded in doing. It is beautiful and touching on a personal level to me. A FAV ... 7 ... CayCay oh, I need give you may favorite response, WOW

Darlene De Beaulieu September 5, 2016 at 2:12 PM I enjoyed your poetry.I could feel the breeze blowing on me.

Paul Callus August 29, 2016 at 5:49 PM Metaphorically lovely; love that gentle breeze that makes up for the worries on that storm tossed pillow. Regards // paul

John Fleming August 28, 2016 at 3:26 AM Nicely penned, Tim. I like the way it drifts in and out of rhyme...Very soothing. My very best regards! :) john

Scott Thirtyseven August 26, 2016 at 8:56 AM This is a great read. I enjoy the way your intentions for this one unravel. A clever piece of poetry. I'll save for a tweet tomorrow.

Nette Onclaud August 25, 2016 at 10:33 PM another mellow piece from you that idnites the senses, tim... goood work; wow!..huggs

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2016 at 7:48 PM The breeze as metaphor for releasing woes is so nice. you are in top form with this one, Tim.

Daniel Turner August 25, 2016 at 9:25 AM This is another excellent write from your heart Tim. May all your breezes refresh and bring comfort to your life.

Tom Quigley August 24, 2016 at 8:02 PM Lovely write!

Casarah Nance August 24, 2016 at 5:33 PM So sweet the soft breeze, it is refreshingly bringing hope your way. Hugs xx

Charmaine Chircop August 24, 2016 at 3:32 PM Beautiful ..So beautiful...Exceptional post...Each line..Yes..I love it all. A FAVE.

John Hamilton August 24, 2016 at 3:25 PM Very nice Tim, tranquility meets serenity on the gentle breeze flowing through the open window to your heart/soul. Very touching, typically you!#7

Jan Allison August 24, 2016 at 2:12 PM Absolutely breathtaking Tim - I love the impact of the repeated phrase and the sense of longing woven throughout the poem is superb. Make sure you keep that window and the door to your heart wide open:-) hugs Jan xx

Lynn Marie August 24, 2016 at 1:47 PM Breathtaking..I love the spiritual feel, your words a lovely balm of gentle inspiration to ease and nurture the weary. Gorgeous writing Tim..a favourite :-) blessings, lynn