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Without Love

There's no room in my head it's filled with thoughts of you. And I'm alive, yet dead, both are equally true. Losing your fight with death grief shrouds me like a glove. You were my blood, my breath, my hope, my dream, my love. I’m as pale as a ghost my heart is out of blood. For missing you the most, it is barely a thud. How much more can I take, without breath, I'll smother. And must endure an ache, unlike any other. My future's dissolving, how am I to cope? My world is devolving, I can't live without hope. I'm far beyond dismayed, on the verge of a scream. And I feel so afraid, for I no longer dream. No one will replace you, I swear to God above. And yet, it's just as true, I will die without love. (Quatrain) 1/11/2015

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Date: 5/26/2018 7:53:00 PM
Beautifully emotive poem, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/12/2015 9:27:00 PM
God loves you and so if You accept Him you will never die with love.. :)! olive eloisa.. :D!
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Date: 1/13/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thanks, your comments are always welcomed, Emile.
Date: 1/12/2015 7:03:00 AM
I hope this is not from real life experience my friend. I've ben there a few times and its e depths of pure misery1 Brilliant write and passion that evokes deeper thoughts! Bravo!!! A7..
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Date: 1/12/2015 7:57:00 AM
Your friendly words have warmed my heart, thank you...Emile.
Date: 1/11/2015 2:19:00 PM
such a heartbreaking write Emile - I ma sure many can relate to the pain you have portrayed in this write:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/11/2015 2:30:00 PM
Thank you so much...your comments are insightful and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 1/11/2015 1:47:00 PM
- So sad heart is, when it is sad of love - A heartbreaking touching poem, Emile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/11/2015 2:14:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise, your comments are always welcome. Emile.

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