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I'Ll Blame It On the Moon

A shattered heart; tears spilling like rain No one would ignite the flames of my desire To this, I swore an oath to never love again until the kiss of a friend, kindled in me a fire His touch was not expected, but felt so right He quoted poems of Byron and then his own Poetry 'neath the stars, I fell in love that night I gave myself eagerly; my heart did condone We walked along the shore, clasping our hands He pulled me close, then we began to explore A time of awakening was not among my plans I quivered in his arms, wanting so much more My oath was then rescinded, but I'm not at fault I'll blame it on the moon, the glimmer of stars, and passionate kisses that unlocked the vault to rid my wounded heart of its jagged scars ~ Inspired by Katie Melua's 'I'll Blame it on the Moon,' written by Mike Batt.

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/10/2020 11:10:00 AM

Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.

John Hamilton

Date: 1/9/2020 9:22:00 AM

I read this one again even better second time, it's obvious that I have to fave this one...but don't blame it on me...blame it on the moon!

Lin Lane
Date: 1/9/2020 11:28:00 AM

A second read is quite a compliment. Thank you for the return trip, J. D.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/9/2020 5:16:00 AM

Ahhh so lovely Lin! It's always the one you never expected isn't it! Then when one falls they we fall hard and never seen it coming! I can relate to this my friend!;)

Lin Lane
Date: 1/9/2020 5:23:00 AM

G'morning, Brenda. Thank you for liking this one. You're right about the way love arrives when least expected.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/8/2020 2:53:00 PM

That moon -- responsible for the 'rising tides that lift all ships,' ---as well as 'all lips! Lovely written, Lin! Best wishes, Gershon

Lin Lane
Date: 1/9/2020 5:21:00 AM

That moon, in any phase, plays such an essential part in tides and matters of the heart. Thank you, Gershon.

John Hamilton

Date: 1/8/2020 9:56:00 AM

Lovely and lush write Lin, I love everything about the moon, your title drew me in, and the read was quite satisfying!

Lin Lane
Date: 1/9/2020 5:20:00 AM

Oh, thank you for such wonderful remarks, John. Celestial bodies are so mysteriously grand, and inspiring for poetry.

John Gondolf

Date: 1/8/2020 5:59:00 AM

From a wounded heart bled dry to falling in love once again...your poetry is always so beautiful, Lin. All the best. John

Lin Lane
Date: 1/8/2020 6:02:00 AM

John, I am deeply moved by the generosity of your thoughts. Thank you, sincerely.

Gary Smith

Date: 1/7/2020 5:00:00 PM

Beautiful poetry Lin, much enjoyed. :)

Lin Lane
Date: 1/7/2020 5:01:00 PM

Thank you ever so sincerely, Gary.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/7/2020 3:37:00 PM

ooh another sensual little lyric Lin - its great the song inspired you to write and you credited both singer and artist - another gem for my faves. Katie Melua and her husband James Toseland have a home on the Island but I've not seen them around except for pictures at charity events. She is a stunning talented lady:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/7/2020 3:43:00 PM

I'm so happy that you know of her, and yes...she is as stunning as her voice is charming. I was sharing one of my favorite songs of hers, 'The Closest Thing to Crazy,' and Blame it on the Moon started. I had to write! Thanks for the uplifting comments, as ever, Jan.

David Mchattie

Date: 1/7/2020 3:30:00 PM

Wonderful poem. Rebirth in love is one of life's greatest treasures. Have a great day my friend.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/7/2020 3:33:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly for reading and leaving your thoughts, David.

Chris Green

Date: 1/7/2020 2:26:00 PM

Those vault unlocking passionate kisses will do it every time and I am sure all it took was glimpse of you by him and he was already reaching for the key. Lucky guy. : ) Beautiful Lin, I actually wrote a song on this theme titled, "And here you come" Never thought I'd ever love again and here you come.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/12/2020 5:12:00 AM

I've listened to it, John. Chris sent me the link and it's a wonderful song. He's quite talented in the arts.

John Hamilton
Date: 1/9/2020 9:19:00 AM

It's a great song Lin, you should check it out, hopefully he still has the link to the music!

Lin Lane
Date: 1/7/2020 2:50:00 PM

Those kisses open many doors, and cause many oaths to be forgotten. There's something about moonlight kisses that make them irresistible. I'd love to read your lyrics, Chris, and thank you for the compliments.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/7/2020 2:19:00 PM

Like the phoenix new love rose from the ashes, An evening stroll along the beach and the moon in the sky a very romantic verse Lin. Tom.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/7/2020 2:48:00 PM

Hi Tom. A perfect setting for love, isn't it? Thanks as always for reading me and leaving your fine remarks.