I'Ll Always Pick Up Pennies

"See a penny, pick it up, the rest of the day, you'll have good luck. See a penny, let it lay; bad luck you'll have all the day." (a proverb from my childhood the way it was recited to me by my mother) I’ll always pick up pennies from the ground. If I chance to see one lying there, It’s an easy thing; I just stoop down. I’ll take that copper coin from anywhere! If I chance to see one lying there, whether on cement, the dirt, or floor. I’ll take that copper coin from anywhere! It matters not if I am rich or poor. Whether on cement, the dirt, or floor, that coin I will pick up, for mother said it matters not if I am rich or poor, And what she said still echoes in my head. That coin I will pick up, for mother said to take it means good luck for all the day. And what she said still echoes in my head: I’ll have bad luck if I just let it lay. To take it means good luck for all the day. It’s an easy thing; I just stoop down. I’ll have bad luck if I just let it lay. I’ll always pick up pennies from the ground. For RHONDA & CYNDI'S PENNY PANTOUMS Poetry Contest
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Hicks Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 9:53 AM
This was really cute, but something I can relate too. I don't know how or why my obsession with coins began. But what's really more tempting when a coin just sits there waiting to be picked up? I've never heard this saying before (perhaps your mom is the creator?... lol)
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September 27, 2012 at 9:37 PM
Andrea-Dear, sorry for the delay in getting here! We so enjoyed the flow of this pantoum, and its message. Thanks for this lovely entry and a belated congrats on the win in our contest. Hope you are well-- I know weekends are busy for you (as they are for me, too.) Hugs to you, Cyndi
Brown Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 5:26 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Rhonda and Cyndi's "Penny Pantoums" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 4:36 PM
Great winning work that you penned..Congrats ....Sara
Onclaud Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 3:33 PM
" it matters not if I am rich or poor, and what she said still echoes in my head..." you have excelled here, andie.. sweet congrats!..:) huggs
Poet Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 11:46 AM
Congrats Andrea on another top ten win!!Loved this Pantoum!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 10:00 AM
CONGRATS ANDREA ON A SUPER SIXTH PLACE WIN FOR A SUPERB ENTRY LUV ..
Gasun Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 9:14 AM
This is really the BEST FOR ME!!!! My favorite pantoum! I'm coming back here to give my HUGE HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN MY DEAR FRIEND, ANDREA!!! luv &hugs:) Leonora
Gorelick Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 7:33 AM
Congrats...me too, Ill always pick up a penny..seems un-Amercan not too...lol. BG
May Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 6:18 AM
congrats on your win Andrea
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 1:24 AM
Congratulations Andy this should have p,aced higher in my most humble opinion, well done and a well deserved win xx
Susan Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Hey, I don't know how I missed this one - it's so cute - you really know how to do these poems. I'm so jealous, lol. good luck in the contest!
Babcock Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 3:36 PM
I love this and I pick up pennies too but I give them away for if you give it to someone you have luck all day. I guess we all have versions of this one. Nicely done. love phyl
Duncan Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 12:04 AM
Yes my mother said the same thing,,,,, my 5yr old g-daughter does the same as well ;} The same with cracks
Bickerstaffe Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 3:56 PM
Excellent PANTOUM Andrea! I applaud you for this entry... I sure hope you win the contest! Best wishes, Keith
Austin Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 1:30 PM
You said it! I always pick up pennies. For years, as a child, I didn't step on cracks in the sidewalk, or walk under ladders. Good write. Love, KOS (king of superstition) daver
Austin Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 1:31 PM
Sorry. That should have been MOS (Master of Superstition)
May Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 12:28 PM
nice pantoum Andrea....best wishes...love...Joseph
Devnath  Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 12:18 PM
Penny is honey always. If lies in pocket good luck happens at least in financial matters. In India it's called Laxmi. Where there's no Laxmi life is painful. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl
Mac Donald Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 10:41 AM
My mom must have said this also...I will always bend down to pick a penny up!:) It would almost be intereting to do a study of the ones who walk past or over it. Put down a loonie in the same spot and people might see it better? Have fun with the contest!! love, Mikki
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 10:06 AM
I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today Andrea. I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX
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August 17, 2012 at 7:07 AM
I too pick up a pennies, the same good luck vibes were instilled at an early age as well. To further enhance luck your supposed to pass it to a friend/love one, as to share your luck and they give it immediately back to you, to double your luck. Awesome write! Hugs.
Pettit Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 8:56 PM
I remember when someone was emptying their car's ashtray in a parking lot. The ashtray was full of pennies, and they were dumped out along with the cigarette butts. I was looking for a shopping cart, but in addition, I found seventy-five cents. They do add up, and your poem is good as usual.
Horsman Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 4:25 PM
another wonderful poem, from you, yes here in the uk we had a similar aspect with pennies(copper) we called our coins, hey hope you like Utah Lady, she is so special to everyone here on soup.
Johnson Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 4:23 PM
Hmmm. I've let alot of pennies lay. Do you suppose? Nice poem Andrea. Good luck.
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 8:36 PM
yep, maybe that is the whole problem, my friend!!!
Poet Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 2:28 PM
Very good Rhyming Pantoum here Andrea..I didn't know about that proverb..Best wishes to you..
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