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I'Ll Always Be Stuck

Immovable in a cold empty space, I’m stuck frozen with nowhere to escape- All security, GONE without a trace, tiny sweat beads are dripping down my nape. Wedged in fear, my screaming turns to silence, for I am nothing but lost and perplexed- The RAGE in my head turns to violence, I know not what dismay will happen next. Confounded inside a room with no light, for I am caught in between four stiff walls- Abandoned by the world and fastened TIGHT, this is my hell as my destiny calls. TREPIDATION fills as I run amuck, for I cannot move... I'LL ALWAYS BE STUCK Stuck Poetry Contest I used howmanysyllables.com September 24, 2017

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Date: 9/28/2017 1:39:00 PM
I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..I can feel the emotion of this situation but there seems to be no resolution to the delima..Sara
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Date: 9/28/2017 7:28:00 AM
I can feel the fear and intensity in you your write Laura. Gave me a chill.
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Date: 9/27/2017 5:06:00 PM
Laura, a wonderful and emotional write, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 9/24/2017 10:00:00 PM
So well penned I felt my chest tighten and breath quicken reading it! Awesome :) all the best for the contest xomo
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Date: 9/24/2017 4:11:00 AM
such chilling imagery LuLoo made me think of someone in solitary confinement. Great theme for the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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