Anil Deo Poet Monoku

Ignorant Wisdom

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If "I don't know" means I fall short on my own, U will see magic

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It takes courage & humility to tell other humans, "Before The Universe, I'm nothing"

BIO NOTE: No internet or connectivity here for more than 14 hours. I lost one 14-line poem, but this Monoku effort made it to PS. More tales to make poetry? ThanX for reading, PS. Shalom, shalom

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Caren Krutsinger May 19, 2022 at 12:46 PM This does take courage ""Before The Universe, I'm nothing""

Bill Baker May 18, 2022 at 6:57 AM It takes faith to be humble and submissive before man, but in God's sight, "the last shall become first". A person's acknowledgement of nothingness is a testimony of their awareness of a perfect God. Bless you Anil. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Valsa George May 18, 2022 at 4:05 AM To admit one's insignificance is certainly humility and God will raise the humble .... Meaningful monoku !

Harry Horsman May 17, 2022 at 7:59 PM Not only an empowered poet, but a humble one as well.. All your poems certainly do Rock, Anil.

Alexis Y. May 17, 2022 at 1:20 PM WoW! Anil, Your monoku is well written and wise. Furthermore, it makes the reader think. I’m sorry to hear about your internet connection. Have a nice day:-)Alexis

Darlene De Beaulieu May 17, 2022 at 11:52 AM Hello Anil Deo,Well I am glad that this poem made it here. Blessings my friend.

Brian Sambourne May 17, 2022 at 6:39 AM Congratulations on writing Monoku submissions that are thoughtful + self reflective. Best wishes, Brian

Malabika Ray Choudhury May 17, 2022 at 5:16 AM Your Monokus are stunning, Anil. So sorry you don't have internet for more than fourteen hours! That's terrible! Hope it's back now. BW ~ Mala

Victor Buhagiar May 16, 2022 at 10:10 PM The second one is important. Anil Deo May 17, 2022 at 12:39 AM ThanX, Victor. In Jesus, we all can feel better & better, & empowered ( I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me, Who died for me) amen amen: a blessed week