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Ignorant Wisdom

I If "I don't know" means I fall short on my own, U will see magic II It takes courage & humility to tell other humans, "Before The Universe, I'm nothing" BIO NOTE: No internet or connectivity here for more than 14 hours. I lost one 14-line poem, but this Monoku effort made it to PS. More tales to make poetry? ThanX for reading, PS. Shalom, shalom

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Date: 5/19/2022 12:46:00 PM
This does take courage ""Before The Universe, I'm nothing""
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Date: 5/18/2022 6:57:00 AM
It takes faith to be humble and submissive before man, but in God's sight, "the last shall become first". A person's acknowledgement of nothingness is a testimony of their awareness of a perfect God. Bless you Anil. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 5/18/2022 4:05:00 AM
To admit one's insignificance is certainly humility and God will raise the humble .... Meaningful monoku !
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Date: 5/17/2022 7:59:00 PM
Not only an empowered poet, but a humble one as well.. All your poems certainly do Rock, Anil.
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Date: 5/17/2022 1:20:00 PM
WoW! Anil, Your monoku is well written and wise. Furthermore, it makes the reader think. I’m sorry to hear about your internet connection. Have a nice day:-)Alexis
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Date: 5/17/2022 11:52:00 AM
Hello Anil Deo,Well I am glad that this poem made it here. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 5/17/2022 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on writing Monoku submissions that are thoughtful + self reflective. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 5/17/2022 5:16:00 AM
Your Monokus are stunning, Anil. So sorry you don't have internet for more than fourteen hours! That's terrible! Hope it's back now. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 5/16/2022 10:10:00 PM
The second one is important.
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Anil Deo
Date: 5/17/2022 12:39:00 AM
ThanX, Victor. In Jesus, we all can feel better & better, & empowered ( I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me, Who died for me) amen amen: a blessed week

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