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Picture Prompt Poetry Contest sponsored by  Margarita Lillico ~ Aug 2024 [Placed 3rd]

Chris lived in the folds of duality Was told to ‘sort out’ sexuality But he buried his head In the water instead Refusing to face life’s reality.

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Date: 9/29/2024 5:10:00 AM
Hi Paul, poor guy no one to explain to him how to sort out his sexuality or his evident frustration, and hence his refusal to face his duality or life's reality. Congrats on your deserved win my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/1/2024 3:18:00 AM
Life is strange in every aspect at the moment. No wonder we long for the good old days. Congrats, Paul, with your win on a very topical subject. SuZ
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Date: 8/27/2024 8:39:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/27/2024 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, Karen. Best regards // paul
Date: 8/25/2024 11:12:00 AM
Hello Paul, Congratulations This is clever. Regards /Darlene/ I hope all is well with you. /Darlene/
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Date: 8/26/2024 3:42:00 PM
Hello paul you are welcome. yes i am keeping well thank you. i hope you are to. Regards /Darlene/
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Date: 8/26/2024 3:31:00 PM
Hi Darlene. Thank you for the comments and congrats. Hope you are keeping well and active. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 8/23/2024 6:48:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Date: 8/23/2024 10:35:00 AM
Thank you, Beata. Pleased to have you visiting. Regards and blessings // paul
Date: 8/22/2024 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations Paul. I liked your reference to duality. Blessings to you..
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Date: 8/22/2024 12:46:00 PM
Thank you on all counts, Nancy. Regards & Blessings // paul
Date: 8/22/2024 2:03:00 AM
congratulations, very creative!
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Date: 8/22/2024 2:22:00 AM
Thank you Terry. Regards // paul
Date: 8/19/2024 1:14:00 PM
Very interesting and unusual take on the picture. I don't know your placement but can you see you won, so congrats to you, Paul.
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Date: 8/19/2024 2:12:00 PM
Thank you for the feedback and congrats, Andrea. Best regards, my friend // paul
Date: 8/19/2024 6:25:00 AM
Best of show! Love it! Xo
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Date: 8/19/2024 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Crystol. Enjoy the week ahead! // paul
Date: 8/18/2024 11:26:00 AM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win Paul:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/18/2024 2:17:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I too just dropped back in your 'pool' with merited congratulations :) Hugs // paul
Date: 8/18/2024 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations, Paul! Quite a spin on a head in a pool:)
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Date: 8/18/2024 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, Margarita, for your thumbs-up :) All the best for the week ahead! :) // paul
Date: 8/15/2024 2:45:00 AM
Reality of todays world, its sad when some feel the need to sort out sexuality at such a tender age, the confusion they must go through must be really intense. Refusing to face reality i hope water does help him see better. For some reason this made me smile! Hah! Love it! Best wishes dear paul. Sending you light always
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Date: 8/15/2024 1:01:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by with such insightful comments, dear Empress...and for enjoying my humble offering. ~ Best regards // paul
Date: 8/12/2024 9:49:00 AM
Very creative, Paul. I agree with SO, it is clever. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!
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Date: 8/14/2024 12:40:00 PM
I love the encouraging comments, Sam...thank you and blessings // paul
Date: 8/11/2024 1:26:00 PM
This one is really clever! Also your limerick really flows and rhymes so well.. I must admit this is not a strong form for me, as I'm never one for meter..
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Date: 8/11/2024 1:54:00 PM
Thank you for the complimentary remarks S1. I have just read you Limerick based on same picture prompt, and I must say that your meter did not let you down! ~ Regards // paul
Date: 8/10/2024 1:50:00 PM
Your imagination soars, paul...I was surprised with the way the ' gender' story turned out ...very good lim, awesome!
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Date: 8/11/2024 1:05:00 AM
Thank you...you are too kind dear Nette; your encouragement is truly appreciated. ~ Have a lovely day // paul
Date: 8/10/2024 6:05:00 AM
Good one, dear. These days it seems so hard to sort out one's sexuality. Burying his head in the water might help him sort it out real quick. I'm in Cyprus at the moment, visiting my daughter. Big hugs
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Date: 8/11/2024 12:56:00 AM
I don't usually write about this topic, Eileen; this Limerick wrote itself! I'm glad you are managing to have a break, and to be with your daughter at the same time. Love & hugs // paul
Date: 8/10/2024 5:59:00 AM
a biting comment on today's insanity....
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/11/2024 12:52:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, John. Regards // paul
Date: 8/10/2024 5:01:00 AM
He sounds very confused Paul, makes a change from sand lol. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 8/10/2024 2:56:00 PM
I am sure it could be a confusing matter, Tom, especially at certain critical ages. Of course, burying heads in sand/water is not the solution. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 8/10/2024 5:00:00 AM
Hi Paul, Oh how timely and clever this one is. Enjoyed..
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Date: 8/10/2024 12:52:00 PM
Glad you stopped by and enjoyed this Limerick, Nancy....thank you:) Regards // paul
Date: 8/10/2024 3:59:00 AM
oh such a topical theme Paul - you really thought out of the box for this one! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/10/2024 12:45:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. On seeing the picture my mind said "ostrich" :) even though there was no sand!! ~ Regards & Hugs // paul

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