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Ifs & Buts

If only, is the sigh- self-centredness cry If only, look at me- what do others see If only, I could give- my selfishness lives If only, I could die- desperation's cry If only, do not buy- the deceiver's lie If only, listen up- drink now of my cup If only, turn around- seek the solid ground If only, hold my hand- we''ll sit,walk then stand If only, born anew- with perspective's view

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Date: 1/22/2010 12:41:00 PM
I really enjoyed this Brian. I appreciate your welcome comments on my writing. Thanks. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 1/21/2010 5:38:00 PM
and if only all would read to accept His message indeed... luv the lines.. if only, do not buy the deceiver's lie.. tremendous ... its a magnificent piece Brian... one to treasure... blessings.. with luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/21/2010 6:53:00 AM
An interesting take on a kyrielle, Brian. YOu really love to experiment. I found your recent contest a challenge indeed and kudos for your making poets notice syntax in poetry! LUv, andrea
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