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If you were mine

If you were mine... If you were mine…our footsteps would dance on moonlit verandas while candle lit shimmers enticed my smiled reflections with your arms tightly around me symphonies would play to the rhythm of your charm as we swayed in the essence of forever on cloud soft concertos of affection’s melodic whispers eternal echoes would sing in harmony to your eyes, hauntingly dark invitations to my endless destination, soothing seductions comforting weathered longings If you were mine…satin beaches would eclipse tan line passions beneath glistening waves of aquamarine salt water bliss gently caressing the depth of our love palm leaf shadows would weave embracing patterns of ocean fed breezes tickling our naked forms as sea foam fingers probe pearl smooth valleys sunset tides would tease beneath star orchid heavens blooming of every wished for fantasy… lasting happily ever after upon sandcastles dreams If you were mine…my world would be a mosaic of delirious euphoric visions in constant creative motion delivering sincerely every ounce of joy your heart could desire each sunrise would be the sweet essence of your spirit vibrant in wonders of colorful poetic offerings versed in accordance with your every need happiness would begin with promises kept as we walked along endless streams of hand held blessings, two hearts loving as one forevermore If you were mine…oh, if you were mine Good night Soupers

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Date: 8/10/2017 9:47:00 AM
Hello Chris,Wow! This poem has made my day. It is so romantic. A breathtaking poem. i enjoyed it. Wow! have a nice day my friend.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/10/2017 1:24:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. :)
Date: 6/14/2017 6:05:00 AM
Good Morning Chris. Allow me to simply say this is beautiful in every way. Honestly. Sorry I'm slow to catch up these days. Have a wonderful morning and day. Keep writing those extraordinary expressions that so enhance.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/14/2017 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so very much my dear friend. I always smile when you stop by no matter how late it might be. Your kindness is one of my greatest joys.
Date: 6/13/2017 5:21:00 AM
Hi Chris!:)Very beautifully painted good night, romantic, sweet and passionate love poem Chris!:)Very enchanting! I truly enjoyed reading it again! A 7 + ! A fav too.And thanks again so much for sharing!:) For sure I'll be back n' continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry, my friend Chris:))Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:)) D.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/13/2017 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend for your kindness.
Date: 6/12/2017 8:26:00 PM
This was so beautiful. I was wishing I was there the whole time. Amazing to stir many feelings.Thanks!
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Chris Green
Date: 6/13/2017 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so very much Madeleine for your kind thoughts. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 6/6/2017 1:06:00 PM
I do not write free verse well at all but you seem to do it so creatively and effortlessly Chris, as with this romantic piece. If only everyone could find the happiness of "two hearts loving as one forevermore" !
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Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 1:10:00 PM
Ok, listen closely Lenna. PFFFFTTTTT. I have read some of your free verse poetry, I think you do an amazing job with it. :) But I thank you for your wonderful comments on mine and I am happy you liked this one
Date: 6/6/2017 9:26:00 AM
I love how you did this one Chris. Powerful repetition and beautiful images. Excellent! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 9:33:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 6/6/2017 8:34:00 AM
Phew! Chris that's romantic and the temperature went up a few degrees - A magnificently sensual and a delicately handled portrayal of an amorously 'explosive' situation...Maria
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Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Maria. I am happy this one warmed you up a little. :)
Date: 6/6/2017 4:25:00 AM
- After reading this poem ... my words get poor ... it's so beautiful, Chris - Many thanks, a pleasure to read each line - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 8:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Anne Lise and your words are always worth so very much to me.
Date: 6/6/2017 3:47:00 AM
Wow! Chris, Each line and every word was amazing. It was capitivaing, mesmerizing and so darn romantic. The repeated use of the line "If you were mine" took an already great piece to another level. Excellent job my friend:-) Alexis PS, you sure have a fantastic way of saying goodnight!
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Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 8:25:00 AM
Thank you again my wonderful friend for always being so kind to me.
Date: 6/6/2017 1:23:00 AM
Owww Chris! So many lines there I would love to quote. I'll just quote this: "palm leaf shadows would weave embracing patterns // of ocean fed breezes tickling our naked forms // as sea foam fingers probe pearl smooth valleys" And the way you have composed this: 3x3 stanzas, with intro and coda ;) Another fave, my talented friend.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thanks so very much my good friend. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 6/5/2017 10:31:00 PM
Excellent, Chris! Love your work bro! Good night
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Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 6/5/2017 8:41:00 PM
oh my gosh, Chris, you are THE romance poet with some of the most awesome images. Sure wish I could do my free verse like this!!! Love it.
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Chris Green
Date: 6/6/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thank you so very much Andrea.