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Poetic Form: Monoku
Inspired: 2024 May 14
Image: Hello! cph.motorola
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if you only knew ... ~~weight of words ..., once more, I ... did~~what..., you knew ... hello

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Date: 5/15/2024 5:35:00 AM
clever and uniquely humorous. Nicely done. Enjoy your day, Sara
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/15/2024 6:40:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, another aspect of the phrase--though not for contest. Aloha, William
Date: 5/15/2024 2:43:00 AM
You have a sense of humor.
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Date: 5/15/2024 6:42:00 AM
Another aspect of the phrase, though not for the ongoing contest. Aloha, William

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