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If You Know

If only you knew…. And that’s the scary part—maybe you do! You’re a threat to my throbbing heart You’re a twinkle to my mind’s eye Just a damn lovable guy! In every sense of the word, you’re out of my reach I try to keep up with your tides— I’m on the wrong beach! You’re here I’m there… But no matter what—you’re still everywhere! In my dreams, in my hurricane of a mind Cursing the spell of your smiles in which I am confined Silly butterflies hither and thither—swarms of them surround Upsidedown, downtown, outback, homeward bound It don’t matter where—you’re there So. . . Check me out! Check me OUT! This hotel’s too expensive I’m getting way too attentive And afflicted and predictive and ADDICTED Trust me, one night of this magical nonsense is enough So if ya don’t mind I’ll just be grabbing my stuff Hitching a ride with whomever—gottah make the run Before I embarrass myself, senseless and outdone! . . . Okay. . . . Here it goes. . . No, I’m not just saying this cause I was tossed off the road by some Pick-up truck chum! I just wanted to have some fun. . . You know me, I couldn’t just give in so easily But I’ll say, I’ve missed you since I’ve been away On this silly-willy road of keep-my-sane You’re still the only beach I wish to reach So if you know, If you have known all along. . . If we’ve been singing the same song. . . Then, just take me home. Yeah, yeah! You were right—I was wrong Marry me quick—just don’t tell my dad or mom!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/15/2016 12:33:00 AM
It is musical indeed......
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/15/2016 1:40:00 PM
You're very talented...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/15/2016 1:02:00 AM
Thanks for readin! <3~Laura
Date: 4/8/2016 2:59:00 AM
I sure had fun reading, ((this out of nowhere read, hehe, so not you, but awesome)) Laura... I felt like saying Yes! yes! LOL.... for fun of course. LINDA
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/8/2016 3:12:00 AM
Hahahha! You're so sweet. Thanks so much (: I know, it was totally out of the blue, a whole new groove huh? ~Laura
Date: 4/8/2016 1:45:00 AM
WOW, you've captivated the perfect wave, here and there, but it is there, everywhere. Laura, your words twirl my mind. This is one out poured proposal. Admitting the stance of one in this poem has what held my attention from start to end... happy ends, plus++++. SHHHH! your secret is safe with me. LINDA
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/8/2016 1:48:00 AM
Thanks sweet Linda! Hope you had a fun dance with these crazy words my friend. : D ~Laura
Date: 4/7/2016 7:16:00 PM
I just love your personality, Laura. And when you write like this it's like butterflies multiplying in my stomach ... damn lovably endearing. "Yeah, yeah! You were right-I was wrong Marry me quick-just don't tell my dad or mom!" ... I got a big smile reading this part. Is there anything more nostalgic and innocent? Perhaps ... but I can't think of anything at the moment! Keep truckin' on down your silly-willy road, and I'll leave my silly-willy comments. Love this one!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/7/2016 9:36:00 PM
Someone call the exterminator--they butterflies everyyyywhhere! ;) Awww, thank you so so much, Timothy!! You always make me smile, so I'm glad this one made ya smile too. Thanks for the love! <3~Laura
Date: 4/6/2016 11:45:00 PM
Excellent. Great rhyme is shown in your poem and well penned too. Thanks for sharing it.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/7/2016 9:29:00 PM
Thanks for readin it! I appreciate the visits, Ravi. ~Laura
Date: 4/6/2016 10:25:00 PM
You are so beautiful when you're lovehyper...when I get the same way I feel anything is possible Laura. "In my dreams, in my hurricane of a mind cursing the spells of your smiles to which I am confined, silly butterflies hither and thither, swarms of them surround..." the pragmatic temper and unflinching honesty of feeling set in this everyday scene of chaos on love road is intense and clear. I love how decisive and real you are when your heart's on the line woman. This poem is alive! J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/7/2016 9:29:00 PM
Sometimes love makes one weak in the nicest way ;) Thanks for reading my sillier one hehe<3~Laura

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