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If We Play Our Cards Right

have a wonderful week everyone thank you
"if we play our cards right" you give me everything what girl could ask for more if I play my cards right my love will let you know I cherish our moments alone nothing could ever compare if you play your cards right such breaths will let me know we whisper love made for two tailored only for me and you if we play our cards right we will always journey as one SkyWatcher 10-22-23

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Date: 10/28/2023 4:38:00 PM
Sounds like a wonderful way to play your cards, my dear friend. Thanks for the light poetry tonight. Very much needed here at the Baker's cave. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/30/2023 3:53:00 PM
Oh wow Bill. Hi. I'm honored by your commentary and note. Thank you. Allow me to say to you also with all your positiveness and inspirational offerings. I am certain God approves. Thank you again, I'm so sorry for all these late responses. Smiles back to you along with Peace and Blessings now and always... PS - May all know of love...
Date: 10/23/2023 5:34:00 PM
Love your style with short sweet poems like this one
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/26/2023 3:22:00 PM
I took prefer writing simple phrases to complicated ones!
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/24/2023 2:28:00 AM
Good Morning Andrea. Hi. Thank you so much. Truly. I know I write in simple everyday expressions but it works for me (smile). I will leave the vintage poetry and expressions up to all of you (another smile) Have a wonderful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always...
Date: 10/23/2023 3:05:00 PM
a lovely love poem, Lisa. The title captured my attention right away. The ending truly spoke to me. I do so appreciate your artistic and poetic voice. Have a splendid evening, Sara PS Bill says 'howdy' from Texas :-)
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/24/2023 2:43:00 AM
Hello Sara. Good Morning. Thank you ever so much and thank you also for mentioning the title (smile). Never do I take your or bill for granted and I am honored by your commentary here. Truly. I know I write in simple every day expressions but it works for me so I leave the vintage expressions up to all of you. (another smile) Please know I very much appreciate your skilled talent as well Sara. Have a wonderful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always to you and Bill. Please tell Bill I say hello from Rhode Island (smile smile smile)
Date: 10/23/2023 9:33:00 AM
Love is all. A dialogue of two lovers who attain paradise. You are so romantic. Blessings.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/23/2023 2:44:00 PM
Thank you very much Victor. Blessings back to you. Have a wonderful night.
Date: 10/23/2023 4:53:00 AM
Lisa, your poem "if we play our cards right" is a beautiful and romantic expression of love. The poem is full of hope and optimism, conveying a deep connection between the speaker and their loved one. I especially appreciate how you use the phrase "play our cards right" to suggest that the speaker and their loved one work together to create a happy and fulfilling relationship.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/23/2023 7:16:00 AM
Hello Daniel. Good Morning. Thank you very much for turning to my entry and for a gracious and generous review to which I do not take for granted. I very much appreciate your intake of the entry. May all know of love. Enjoy the day and poetrysoup as well. Take Care (smile)

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