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If We Play Our Cards Right

have a wonderful week everyone
thank you

"if we play our cards right"

you give me everything
what girl could ask for more
if I play my cards right
my love will let you know

I cherish our moments alone
nothing could ever compare
if you play your cards right
such breaths will let me know

we whisper love made for two
tailored only for me and you
if we play our cards right
we will always journey as one

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10-22-23

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Bill Baker Date: 10/28/2023 4:38:00 PM Sounds like a wonderful way to play your cards, my dear friend. Thanks for the light poetry tonight. Very much needed here at the Baker's cave. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings Bill Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 10/30/2023 3:53:00 PM Oh wow Bill. Hi. I'm honored by your commentary and note. Thank you. Allow me to say to you also with all your positiveness and inspirational offerings. I am certain God approves. Thank you again, I'm so sorry for all these late responses. Smiles back to you along with Peace and Blessings now and always... PS - May all know of love...

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/23/2023 5:34:00 PM Love your style with short sweet poems like this one Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/26/2023 3:22:00 PM I took prefer writing simple phrases to complicated ones! Lisa Ricci Date: 10/24/2023 2:28:00 AM Good Morning Andrea. Hi. Thank you so much. Truly. I know I write in simple everyday expressions but it works for me (smile). I will leave the vintage poetry and expressions up to all of you (another smile) Have a wonderful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always...

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/23/2023 9:33:00 AM Love is all. A dialogue of two lovers who attain paradise. You are so romantic. Blessings. Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 10/23/2023 2:44:00 PM Thank you very much Victor. Blessings back to you. Have a wonderful night.

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 10/23/2023 4:53:00 AM Lisa, your poem "if we play our cards right" is a beautiful and romantic expression of love. The poem is full of hope and optimism, conveying a deep connection between the speaker and their loved one. I especially appreciate how you use the phrase "play our cards right" to suggest that the speaker and their loved one work together to create a happy and fulfilling relationship. Login to Reply Lisa Ricci Date: 10/23/2023 7:16:00 AM Hello Daniel. Good Morning. Thank you very much for turning to my entry and for a gracious and generous review to which I do not take for granted. I very much appreciate your intake of the entry. May all know of love. Enjoy the day and poetrysoup as well. Take Care (smile)