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If Two Can Make a Summer

Two sparrows wonder: If she, me as the lover Can make a summer! __________________________ Haiku |08.04.2021| Topic: sparrows, summer Poet’s note: I see two sparrows on a tree branch. They seemed to be seriously deliberating on something. Spring is more than up its midway journey, and early signs of summer have set in. A poet had long back said: A solitary sparrow cannot a summer make. And this Haiku comes to my mind.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2021 10:34:00 PM

I like this and also the note you put underneath it.

Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 5/17/2021 7:16:00 AM

Thanks, but as they say, where there's will there's a way. I'd have just posted the picture I saw, but you know what, I'm not a premium member, you see....

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/8/2021 2:53:00 PM

Beautiful haiku! Enjoy watching birds - you have said so much in so few words. BW ~ Mala

Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 5/9/2021 6:11:00 AM

A picture, they say, is worth a thousand words. A tiny poem too is no tiny insofar as things it can convey. Thanks for visiting the poem.