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If These Walls Could Talk

If These Walls Could Talk
If these walls could talk, how dare you ask such a thing?
What do you think we do, and remember we see everything?
You come in here and bang the door the plaster looses its hold
Never think of what you’ve done, your actions loud and bold
I could tell your mum some tales, the boys you bring in here
And you never know I might- I even know about the beer…
Your thoughtless ways, you draw on me, and dig holes with a pen
Then you scream it’s your bedroom, and slam the door again
You want to be careful girl just because you abuse me and you kick
I may have stood for 8o years but you really make me sick
I was once proud and smooth and you have knocked great chunks out of me
But I will get my own back, just you wait and see
The next time you bring him in here and think that no one knows
I will show them what you are, all your sins I’ll put on show
One more bang will be your last that much I promise you
For when you bang the door and him, I am gonna drop down on you two.
© 09/09/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/20/2012 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2012 3:34:00 PM
congrats on this winner, loved it from the start...
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Date: 9/19/2012 11:07:00 AM
Pissed off walls.....this is great! Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 9/19/2012 11:11:00 AM
I love that comment, wowser xx
Date: 9/18/2012 9:48:00 AM
Wow that wall is truly angry and resentful. Hope she didn't have to go that far. congratulations on your win Mandy. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/18/2012 8:14:00 AM
CONGRATS MANDY ON A SUPERB WRITE AND WIN LUV .. MOST CREATIVE WORK ..
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Date: 9/17/2012 9:16:00 PM
I love it just as much seeing it again. Susan's contests sure do bring out the best in people, don't you think so? Big congrats.
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Date: 9/17/2012 7:59:00 PM
Congratulations with your awesome win, Mandy!! :) hugs Leonora
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Date: 9/17/2012 6:41:00 PM
Mandy, I am laughing so hard...this is sweet. Good win. Congrats. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/17/2012 12:32:00 PM
superb write, mandy... another feather on your cap; sweet congrats on your winning spot!.:) huggs
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Date: 9/17/2012 11:39:00 AM
A great poem Mandy!Congrats on your win in the contest.
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Date: 9/17/2012 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your #4 win in my contest! I liked the attitude in this, and how a person's actions, like banging a door, affect the walls :)
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Date: 9/17/2012 10:27:00 AM
MANDY, congratulations with your wonderful win in Susan's "If These Walls Could Talk..." contest.. have a nice day~ PD
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Date: 9/17/2012 9:45:00 AM
congrats on your win Mandy
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Date: 9/10/2012 4:52:00 AM
interesting use of personification in this contest poem; an original idea to have the walls literally 'talk'! :-)
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Date: 9/9/2012 6:32:00 PM
ha! i like the way you've used personification here - very creatively done. nice poem!
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Date: 9/9/2012 11:15:00 AM
(^_^) enjoy reading your awesome poem Mandy. Congrats!! Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed day always!! **Maria**
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Date: 9/9/2012 6:57:00 AM
Oh!!! this seems like a warning and how beautifully have u construed the title....:))
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Date: 9/9/2012 6:07:00 AM
soupmail
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Date: 9/9/2012 5:59:00 AM
love the way you have constructed this , the best i've read, for this contest so far,
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Date: 9/8/2012 11:42:00 PM
this is AWESOME, Mandy!! I really like how you did your theme for the contest. I'd sure score it high!!
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Date: 9/8/2012 11:11:00 PM
Sounds like the wall is issuing an ultimatum to the perpetrators. Good write as usual Mandy.
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