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If There Was No Tomorrow

When time past would freeze in winter of discontent from eternity I’d borrow the spring of time present, and bloom the flowers of time future in my meadow, if there was no tomorrow. The sunburst sky’s spectral flow of heavenly hue radiated the tinge of ecstasy from the dawn’s dew, in my unclosed eyes the perpetual painting I’d stow, if there was no tomorrow. At the edge of the seraphic night’s tapestry of blue when the motif of love I lost I’d discover anew, my dreams I’d lay on timeless moonbeam’s glow, if there was no tomorrow. When all the bridges of belonging would burn a dismayed voyager from the wilds to you I’d return, with you I’d merge turning to your second shadow, if there was no tomorrow.
Written : August 21, 2019 January 20, 2020 Contest : Strand Choice Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 9/19/2023 6:56:00 PM
Dear Subimal, the depth and breadth of the emotional and poetic beauty in your rhyming verse is breathtaking. An artistic gem of superb feeling, imagery and metaphors. Congratulations for your excellent win in Robert's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/19/2023 8:43:00 AM
Great beauty in your sensuous words Subimal. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 1/21/2020 12:06:00 PM
What a way with words you have in this LIFE felt statement. I will be reading this many times! Lonna
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Date: 1/20/2020 10:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win that, like It's a Wonderful Life, explores the great question "What if...?"
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Date: 8/24/2019 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/24/2019 7:43:00 PM
perfect penning, your word choices and images really paint a beautiful picture and i love this one...congratulations on your top win :)
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Date: 8/24/2019 1:25:00 PM
This is top shelf writing Subimal, congrats on yet another win!
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Date: 8/24/2019 11:13:00 AM
great poem sweet Subimal, you never cease to amaze :)-luloo
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Date: 8/24/2019 8:54:00 AM
- I enjoy it from first to last line ... beautiful :) - Congratulations on your win, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/24/2019 3:40:00 AM
Brilliant poem Subimal, nice rhymes and flow, but the contest is also emotive and deep and show commitment and loyalty.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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