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If the Language Is Ruined

the chirped chit-chats from two or three days end in mutually opposite looks! hand in hand being mutilated though lips didn’t open talks will be continued. though the language is ruined meaning will reach! orchestra of silent beats! music of heart-beats!! the hand bidding farewell press the other gently… and leaves – finally! and at last, oscillate itself distant and distant slowly disappear. frozen devastated language- deposit a number of feelings… carry along a number of experiences! the language if devastated- souls can talk… and can play- as unfurled peacock’s tail… unveiling the layers… spreads open clearly!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/31/2015 9:27:00 PM
awesome
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Date: 8/21/2010 10:37:00 AM
this is marvelous. keep it up. One day will come for this to be real thing. to break out of your silence.
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Date: 8/20/2010 4:34:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Makineedi. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2010 9:22:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more.. with luv..
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:05:00 PM
It is a decent verse, and i would like to welcome you in the poetrysoup .. :)
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Date: 8/19/2010 3:48:00 PM
Nice one, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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