If the Language Is Ruined

the chirped chit-chats
from two or three days
end in mutually opposite looks!

hand in hand
being mutilated

though lips didn’t open
talks will be continued.

though the language is ruined
meaning will reach!

orchestra of silent beats!
music of heart-beats!!

the hand bidding farewell
press the other gently…
and leaves – finally!

and at last, oscillate itself
distant and distant
slowly disappear.

frozen devastated language-
deposit a number of feelings…
carry along a number of experiences!

the language
if devastated-

souls can talk…
and can play-

as unfurled peacock’s tail…

unveiling the layers…
spreads open clearly!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 9:27 PM
awesome
Kofi Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 10:37 AM
this is marvelous. keep it up. One day will come for this to be real thing. to break out of your silence.
Brown Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 4:34 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Makineedi. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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August 19, 2010 at 9:22 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more.. with luv..
Ulhaque Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 6:05 PM
It is a decent verse, and i would like to welcome you in the poetrysoup .. :)
A   Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 3:48 PM
Nice one, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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