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7/3/2026 for Ceraunophilia Poetry Contest sponsored by Craig Cornish

If Six Was Lightning and Nine Was Thunder

In appreciation of Jimi Hendrix and Mary Shelley 

I am sick of minor authorities,
and my boring life, and those stupid fools - 
of my job, order, and priorities.
Strike this mundane existence and these rules. 
Rise, Jimi, with your electric guitar. 
Ghost of your wild, psychedelic flower -
flash stirring midnight lightning from afar.
Jolt me with true, tempestuous power.
Nature, release me from the doldrums' grip,
Blast away, these cloudless, temperate days. 
Come on baby, bring it.  Now, let 'er rip. 
Light up this flesh, these bones through purple haze, 
Like Frankenstein and his beautiful wife,
the lightning and thunder bring this beast life.
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Kauffman Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 11:08 AM
David, congratulations on your win! Your creative mind is on full display! High fives to you! Blessings.
Crandall Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 9:04 PM
Thanks, Sam! 😊
Wolf Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 8:43 PM
Never thought of putting Hendrix and Mary Shelly together. Pretty wild ...
Crandall Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 5:25 PM
Haha, yep, a weird combination!
Gifford Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 1:35 AM
Hello David, an excellent write, I enjoyed the read. Wishing you a wonderful day, my friend.
Crandall Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 6:33 PM
Thanks, Zyrool! Glad you liked it!
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 10:21 PM
Wow. You did a magnificent job here. So clever how you used 69. I almost didn't catch the reference right at first. Very cool images throughout
Crandall Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 6:42 PM
Thanks, Andrea - great, I don't know how many readers will know that song!
Empress Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 8:44 AM
Wow i love the lines here "Ghost of your wild, psychedelic flower - flash stirring midnight lightning from afar. Jolt me with true, tempestuous power." :O iv heard jimi hendrix is into psychedelic stuff. Theres a lyrical touch to your word weaving here and its very creatively done! I absolutely love the flow and depth! especially the opening gives a confessional vibe! Which I appreciate. Best wishes ~ sending you light always! And this is a fave
Crandall Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 6:33 PM
Thanks, Ink! Yep, Jimi was a wondrerful (arguably the premier) guitarist in the era of psychedelic rock. Your poems are kind of psychedelic - you might like him!
Smith  Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 8:50 PM
Love this. Well done.
Crandall Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 6:34 PM
Thanks, Alison!
Crandall Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 6:26 PM
Thanks, Alison!
Jones Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 6:51 PM
Very creative David and a great contender! Best wishes!
Crandall Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 6:41 PM
Thanks, Karen!
Crandall Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 6:26 PM
Thanks, Karen!
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