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If Only You Knew

Behind my smile if only you knew How very deeply I love you And the life we’ve made our own I haven’t the courage to go on alone Sure for your benefit I put on airs And act strong through my layers I try to deal as best I may And keep my inside tears at bay I may stand here and look stoic But my feelings are less heroic I mask the vulnerability inside So you won’t see the fear I hide Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~THE POWER OF TWO~ 2020 AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on August 26, 2019 for contest IF ONLY YOU KNEW sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 8/31/2019 3:01:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2019 10:13:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine.
Date: 8/31/2019 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations. So true. Great Job.........
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2019 10:14:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/30/2019 12:43:00 PM
A beautiful poem ... Congratulations, Line ...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/30/2019 3:08:00 PM
Thank you, Probir. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/29/2019 4:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/29/2019 7:51:00 PM
Thanks, SO. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/27/2019 2:17:00 AM
Hello Line … romance and uncertainty at times goes hand in hand, and you have written your version well - thank you Line - Lindsay
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/27/2019 7:25:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Lindsay.
Date: 8/26/2019 9:42:00 PM
Nicely done! Deeply heartfelt!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/26/2019 10:16:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.
Date: 8/26/2019 8:53:00 PM
Beautiful! A strong woman wrote this!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/26/2019 9:11:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and most appreciated comment, Timothy.
Date: 8/26/2019 1:27:00 PM
Enjoyed this one Line, some powerful verses, good luck in the contest, regards, Kevin
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/26/2019 3:49:00 PM
Thanks, Kevin. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/26/2019 12:26:00 PM
Wonderful, Line! Your forgotten, Panagiota
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/26/2019 3:49:00 PM
Thanks, forgotten. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/26/2019 12:18:00 PM
Wow this is good. I like the line --I mask the vulnerability inside. A winner for sure you can feel for this person and their fears. love phyl
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/26/2019 3:49:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Phyllis. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/26/2019 10:26:00 AM
Line, I'm glad I got a quiet moment this morning to read some of your poems. Like your poem 'Wow Moments'. -Richard
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/26/2019 3:50:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. Much appreciated.

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