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If Only My Wish Would Come True

Images of children dwelling in developing world In plight of poverty~~ some two billion strong, Fly a flag of existence, waving distress unfurled, Crooning mournful song: is this where we belong? Struggling in parched lands of bared dreary sights World they live in is the world they have known, Where days of emptiness cede to dreary nights Churning nightmares as dreams vacant bemoan. Wishing upon an angel~ I would endeavor to plead For turning places despaired into domains of hope, For means to educate, learn skills, write and read, For rewriting will of destiny, while striving to cope. If I could bend sorrow and the fate of tomorrow Seeds of knowledge I’ll sow in the dreaded woe Marveling the fields of wisdom sprout and grow As minds edified glow, defying misery’s shadow. My wish for peace echoes benevolence spurred As hymns of unity in the temple of goodwill toll And calls of equity from endearing hearts heard Reverberate harmony in euphony of sublime soul. I wish upon a candle, for world to join a sing-along Lauding pledges of love to spur the youth on and on Cheering to acclaim: this is where the kids belong~ In benevolence of hearts, over seven billion strong. June 13, 2022 Placed 1st: If Only My Wish Would Come True Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Ink Empress

Date: 1/19/2024 2:52:00 AM

This is so heartfelt and so touching, you ability to feel emotions and empathize with all that which is going around in the world in various parts as well as those who are in need is so well depicted in the most poetic manner. I felt the depth of emotions conveyed and the way you’ve rhymed and made this flow in eloquence is impeccable! Truly a fave this is for me! Pleasure reading your work always

The Situation

Date: 7/11/2023 5:50:00 PM

This deserved first place. gotta make you a fav. You have an angels attention and he is useing you like a greek philosepher.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/25/2022 3:39:00 PM

Vijay I wish your wish could come true, I pray for those living in poverty too. The world is so unfair if only everyone cared and shared. A magnificent write… Belle

Anil Deo

Date: 6/25/2022 11:42:00 AM

Om, shalom shalom Mera Bhaiji.

Valsa George

Date: 6/24/2022 10:15:00 PM

Back to your excellent poem with Congratulations on your first place win, Vijay !

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/24/2022 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely wish/write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/24/2022 5:06:00 AM

Back with congratulations on achieving such remarkable success, Vijay, with this superbly written piece.

Michael Tor

Date: 6/19/2022 9:56:00 PM

Your Humanitarian side Shines brightly my friend. Your words were heartfelt and encouraging with Hope. So many are destitute and it really upsets me with the wealth America has these children, all of them arent helped.They will have their day though Vijay. When they reach heaven. A favorite poem for me, it was touching to read, your words were my sentiment. God bless you my friend and I pray and support UNICEF...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2022 8:07:00 AM

You are so right about the plight of children, Michael. I appreciate and value your insightful remarks. A special treat to receive a FAVE from you. Many thanks for the FAVE and prayers for the children.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 6/19/2022 2:31:00 PM

Hi Vijay! In this poem, you have captured everyone’s greatest wish. This is what we all wish for, whether we know it or not. Beautiful!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2022 5:21:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Jennifer--many thanks.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/19/2022 2:12:00 PM

Gorgeous piece as usual, Vijay:-) Thoroughly enjoyed it. Good luck in Anoucheka's contest. I doubt you'll need it, though!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2022 5:20:00 AM

You are so very kind. Much appreciate your visit and remarks, Edward. Many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 6/19/2022 1:09:00 PM

We need to turn "places despaired into domains of hope", Powerful write Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2022 5:20:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. Much appreciate.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/19/2022 7:23:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. You have touched on some very politically touchy subjects in this one. We as an individual can't save the world but we might be able to save one child. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2022 5:19:00 AM

I agree with the sentiments you convey, Sara. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/19/2022 4:55:00 AM

Vijay, your unselfish and awe inspiring wish is truly splendid and worthy! It is so easy to forget the troubles of others when wallowing in one's own problems or enjoying the gifts of life that others do not share. What a marvelously crafted poem full of intelligence and beauty! Just wonderful! Happy Sunday !!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2022 6:27:00 AM

So very kind of you to say so, Mike. Glad you could visit with your thoughtful remarks. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/19/2022 2:40:00 AM

This is so deep... So powerful... If I could bend sorrow and the fate of tomorrow Seeds of knowledge I’ll sow in the dreaded woe" what a generous genuine wish!!! Certainly a winner and my fav ...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2022 6:26:00 AM

Glad you liked the poem, Supraja. Your insightful remarks are appreciated and valued--and so is your FAVE. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/18/2022 11:23:00 AM

Vijay, your writing is so lovely, and it sounds like it came right from your heart. A hope that really ought to be realized! The entirety of the poem possesses high poetic quality. It is one of my Favorites.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/19/2022 6:24:00 AM

So special to hear that from you my friend. Your presence on Poetry Soup is delightful to many. Much appreciate your kind feedback and FAVE. Many, many thanks for both.

Deb M

Date: 6/17/2022 3:13:00 AM

Written straight from your heart Vijay and so very beautiful! A wish that needs to come true! Debx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/18/2022 6:23:00 AM

I agree--a wish that should come true. Much appreciate your thoughtful comments, Deb. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/16/2022 9:48:00 AM

Wow! This so so nice Vijay. It shows your heart too. I love the line, if I could bend sorrow and the fate of tomorrow! Love that stanza and the last one too. The entire poem is excellent poetry. A Fave for me! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/18/2022 6:22:00 AM

I am always very happy to read your feedback my friend. Thank you for your FAVE and your presence on Poetry Soup. Much appreciate!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/15/2022 10:18:00 AM

Great and heartfelt write, to right the wrong of poverty! Vijay, I love the line: If I could bend sorrow and the fate of tomorrow

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/16/2022 5:00:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and thoughtful feedback, Kim. Many thanks.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 6/15/2022 6:48:00 AM

A strong one for the contest... Good luck Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/16/2022 4:59:00 AM

Thank you--much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/14/2022 4:59:00 PM

Oh, yes, Vijay, let us hope and pray for a better world for the young, for strong mentors for them. Such a moving poem! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/15/2022 5:53:00 AM

Much appreciate your endearing feedback, Janice, in honor of the children. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Bill Baker

Date: 6/14/2022 4:35:00 PM

Thank you for sharing this great need with us through your poetry, Vijay. My soul cries out for the young in our world. The pain they are and will be enduring is because of the sins of their fathers, us. We have brought hell to earth through lust for power and money. Our greed is destroying our world. We're biting the hand that feeds us. God help us to help ourselves and turn from our wicked ways. Great entry, good luck my friend. Bill

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/15/2022 5:52:00 AM

Benevolence of your comments resonates on this page, Bill. Much appreciate your thoughtful analysis. Many thanks, as always.

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/14/2022 3:46:00 PM

There is no action without first the thought. If not ours, then it is God's: The dream is where all light begins, a vision leading us to planes with varying dimensions of physical/spiritual experience. They are not just our children, they are the extension of the dream...the gifted power of Divine Mind to exhale out a good and moral generation...or a hell. Excellent write! Best of luck in contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/15/2022 5:51:00 AM

Your insightful remarks are on mark, Joe. Much appreciate the care you convey. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2022 1:37:00 PM

This is the perfect message for the contest, Vijay. Sure to do well!!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/15/2022 5:49:00 AM

So glad you like the poem, Andrea--so special coming from you. many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/14/2022 1:01:00 PM

I will wish upon that same bright candle, that the flames of love will spread widely from one end of the Universe to the other. You have a big heart Vijay, it shows in all your poetry, have a great day :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/15/2022 5:48:00 AM

Glad to hear we share the same sentiments. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Vienna. Many thanks.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/14/2022 6:35:00 AM

You tackle a growing crisis here, Vijay. I agree, with your wish.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/14/2022 7:32:00 AM

I am happy to hear that. Much appreciate Harry--many thanks.