Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

If Only My Wish Would Come True

Images of children dwelling in developing world
In plight of poverty~~ some two billion strong,
Fly a flag of existence, waving distress unfurled,
Crooning mournful song: is this where we belong?

Struggling in parched lands of bared dreary sights
World they live in is the world they have known,
Where days of emptiness cede to dreary nights
Churning nightmares as dreams vacant bemoan.

Wishing upon an angel~ I would endeavor to plead
For turning places despaired into domains of hope,
For means to educate, learn skills, write and read,
For rewriting will of destiny, while striving to cope.

If I could bend sorrow and the fate of tomorrow
Seeds of knowledge I’ll sow in the dreaded woe
Marveling the fields of wisdom sprout and grow
As minds edified glow, defying misery’s shadow.

My wish for peace echoes benevolence spurred
As hymns of unity in the temple of goodwill toll
And calls of equity from endearing hearts heard
Reverberate harmony in euphony of sublime soul.

I wish upon a candle, for world to join a sing-along
Lauding pledges of love to spur the youth on and on
Cheering to acclaim: this is where the kids belong~
In benevolence of hearts, over seven billion strong.

June 13, 2022
Placed 1st: If Only My Wish Would Come True Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Ink Empress January 19, 2024 at 2:52 AM This is so heartfelt and so touching, you ability to feel emotions and empathize with all that which is going around in the world in various parts as well as those who are in need is so well depicted in the most poetic manner. I felt the depth of emotions conveyed and the way you’ve rhymed and made this flow in eloquence is impeccable! Truly a fave this is for me! Pleasure reading your work always

The Situation July 11, 2023 at 5:50 PM This deserved first place. gotta make you a fav. You have an angels attention and he is useing you like a greek philosepher.

Beryl Edmonds June 25, 2022 at 3:39 PM Vijay I wish your wish could come true, I pray for those living in poverty too. The world is so unfair if only everyone cared and shared. A magnificent write… Belle

Anil Deo June 25, 2022 at 11:42 AM Om, shalom shalom Mera Bhaiji.

Valsa George June 24, 2022 at 10:15 PM Back to your excellent poem with Congratulations on your first place win, Vijay !

Paula Goldsmith June 24, 2022 at 11:35 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely wish/write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Sotto Poet June 24, 2022 at 5:06 AM Back with congratulations on achieving such remarkable success, Vijay, with this superbly written piece.

Michael Tor June 19, 2022 at 9:56 PM Your Humanitarian side Shines brightly my friend. Your words were heartfelt and encouraging with Hope. So many are destitute and it really upsets me with the wealth America has these children, all of them arent helped.They will have their day though Vijay. When they reach heaven. A favorite poem for me, it was touching to read, your words were my sentiment. God bless you my friend and I pray and support UNICEF... Vijay Pandit June 20, 2022 at 8:07 AM You are so right about the plight of children, Michael. I appreciate and value your insightful remarks. A special treat to receive a FAVE from you. Many thanks for the FAVE and prayers for the children.

Jennifer Fenn June 19, 2022 at 2:31 PM Hi Vijay! In this poem, you have captured everyone’s greatest wish. This is what we all wish for, whether we know it or not. Beautiful! Vijay Pandit June 20, 2022 at 5:21 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Jennifer--many thanks.

Edward Ibeh June 19, 2022 at 2:12 PM Gorgeous piece as usual, Vijay:-) Thoroughly enjoyed it. Good luck in Anoucheka's contest. I doubt you'll need it, though! Vijay Pandit June 20, 2022 at 5:20 AM You are so very kind. Much appreciate your visit and remarks, Edward. Many thanks.

Joseph May June 19, 2022 at 1:09 PM We need to turn "places despaired into domains of hope", Powerful write Vijay Vijay Pandit June 20, 2022 at 5:20 AM Thank you Joseph. Much appreciate.

Sara Kendrick June 19, 2022 at 7:23 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. You have touched on some very politically touchy subjects in this one. We as an individual can't save the world but we might be able to save one child. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara Vijay Pandit June 20, 2022 at 5:19 AM I agree with the sentiments you convey, Sara. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile June 19, 2022 at 4:55 AM Vijay, your unselfish and awe inspiring wish is truly splendid and worthy! It is so easy to forget the troubles of others when wallowing in one's own problems or enjoying the gifts of life that others do not share. What a marvelously crafted poem full of intelligence and beauty! Just wonderful! Happy Sunday !! Vijay Pandit June 19, 2022 at 6:27 AM So very kind of you to say so, Mike. Glad you could visit with your thoughtful remarks. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

Supraja Kannan June 19, 2022 at 2:40 AM This is so deep... So powerful... If I could bend sorrow and the fate of tomorrow Seeds of knowledge I’ll sow in the dreaded woe" what a generous genuine wish!!! Certainly a winner and my fav ... Vijay Pandit June 19, 2022 at 6:26 AM Glad you liked the poem, Supraja. Your insightful remarks are appreciated and valued--and so is your FAVE. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Sotto Poet June 18, 2022 at 11:23 AM Vijay, your writing is so lovely, and it sounds like it came right from your heart. A hope that really ought to be realized! The entirety of the poem possesses high poetic quality. It is one of my Favorites. Vijay Pandit June 19, 2022 at 6:24 AM So special to hear that from you my friend. Your presence on Poetry Soup is delightful to many. Much appreciate your kind feedback and FAVE. Many, many thanks for both.

Deb M June 17, 2022 at 3:13 AM Written straight from your heart Vijay and so very beautiful! A wish that needs to come true! Debx Vijay Pandit June 18, 2022 at 6:23 AM I agree--a wish that should come true. Much appreciate your thoughtful comments, Deb. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands June 16, 2022 at 9:48 AM Wow! This so so nice Vijay. It shows your heart too. I love the line, if I could bend sorrow and the fate of tomorrow! Love that stanza and the last one too. The entire poem is excellent poetry. A Fave for me! :) Vijay Pandit June 18, 2022 at 6:22 AM I am always very happy to read your feedback my friend. Thank you for your FAVE and your presence on Poetry Soup. Much appreciate!

Kim Rodrigues June 15, 2022 at 10:18 AM Great and heartfelt write, to right the wrong of poverty! Vijay, I love the line: If I could bend sorrow and the fate of tomorrow Vijay Pandit June 16, 2022 at 5:00 AM Much appreciate your visit and thoughtful feedback, Kim. Many thanks.

Paghunda Zahid June 15, 2022 at 6:48 AM A strong one for the contest... Good luck Vijay Vijay Pandit June 16, 2022 at 4:59 AM Thank you--much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy June 14, 2022 at 4:59 PM Oh, yes, Vijay, let us hope and pray for a better world for the young, for strong mentors for them. Such a moving poem! Janice Vijay Pandit June 15, 2022 at 5:53 AM Much appreciate your endearing feedback, Janice, in honor of the children. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Bill Baker June 14, 2022 at 4:35 PM Thank you for sharing this great need with us through your poetry, Vijay. My soul cries out for the young in our world. The pain they are and will be enduring is because of the sins of their fathers, us. We have brought hell to earth through lust for power and money. Our greed is destroying our world. We're biting the hand that feeds us. God help us to help ourselves and turn from our wicked ways. Great entry, good luck my friend. Bill Vijay Pandit June 15, 2022 at 5:52 AM Benevolence of your comments resonates on this page, Bill. Much appreciate your thoughtful analysis. Many thanks, as always.

Joseph P. DiMino June 14, 2022 at 3:46 PM There is no action without first the thought. If not ours, then it is God's: The dream is where all light begins, a vision leading us to planes with varying dimensions of physical/spiritual experience. They are not just our children, they are the extension of the dream...the gifted power of Divine Mind to exhale out a good and moral generation...or a hell. Excellent write! Best of luck in contest. Vijay Pandit June 15, 2022 at 5:51 AM Your insightful remarks are on mark, Joe. Much appreciate the care you convey. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Andrea Dietrich June 14, 2022 at 1:37 PM This is the perfect message for the contest, Vijay. Sure to do well!!! Vijay Pandit June 15, 2022 at 5:49 AM So glad you like the poem, Andrea--so special coming from you. many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose June 14, 2022 at 1:01 PM I will wish upon that same bright candle, that the flames of love will spread widely from one end of the Universe to the other. You have a big heart Vijay, it shows in all your poetry, have a great day :) Vijay Pandit June 15, 2022 at 5:48 AM Glad to hear we share the same sentiments. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Vienna. Many thanks.

Harry Horsman June 14, 2022 at 6:35 AM You tackle a growing crisis here, Vijay. I agree, with your wish. Vijay Pandit June 14, 2022 at 7:32 AM I am happy to hear that. Much appreciate Harry--many thanks.

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