If Only Morning Could Last

To hold the morning throughout the day,
                                   into the envelope of night

                                where tiny dewdrops dangle,
                                in the hush of morning light.

                                To hear the hymns of birds
                               that sing, with the rising sun,

                                if only morning could last,
                                 until the day was done.

                               The gentle mist awakens
                             the delicate faces of flowers,

                         lavish blooms of Morning Glories,
                          embrace the temperate showers.

                             If only morning could last.


Date: July 11,2022
For: The Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Placed 6th in contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 8:38 PM
"The gentle mist awakens the delicate faces of flowers,"...... Such a striking image. Early in the morning I enjoy watching the dew washed petals and the awakened faces of flowers. Lovely penning, dear Paulette !
Calasibetta Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Valsa, thank you for stopping by to comment….I see you too enjoy the pleasures in nature that the morning brings. Happy weekend! :)Paulette
Wolf Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 8:04 PM
If only! Glorious write, Paulette. Keep that morning spirit ready at hand! Spectacular Sunrises, gw
Calasibetta Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 2:39 PM
Yes, it is true, isn't it "If Only"....thanks for stopping by with such complimentary comments. :)Paulette
Martin Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 6:00 PM
Lovely philosophical rhyme Ms. Paulette. A very nice introduction to my first peek into your poetic imagery. But I don't believe it will my last. Looking forward to returning to your poetic garden. All the BEST life has to offer/ Terry
Calasibetta Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 11:50 AM
Your complimentary comments have made my day. So glad you enjoyed this. Yes, please peek into some of my other poems as I will yours. :)Paulette
Tor Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 9:51 AM
I use to be a morning person but lately I have been staying up all night with my Collie Tavi and reading poetry and watching Poker on TV, what an exciting life I lead Paulette lol. I have been working painting the deck until 10 in the evening. So that is my reward for doing so. I ove the mornings though all the animals are out and about. Love watching them... Love your Poetry. Blessings your way Dear...
Calasibetta Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 11:01 AM
Hi Michael, I think we go through stages in life because I never was a morning person until recently. I love listening to the birds and breathing in the fresh scent of morning, is priceless. Sounds like you and Tavi are enjoying life.....if you are doing what you love, then you life is full and rich. Thanks for stopping by, my friend. :)Paulette
Baker Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 5:38 PM
Congrats on the high place, Paulette. I really enjoyed the calming read and just like you, I wish the monring could last. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Calasibetta Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 4:38 AM
Thanks for stopping by to comment~Yes, morning is the place I'd like to be all day! :)Paulette
Canerdy Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Paulette, CONGRATS on your win with this lovely poem! Janice
Calasibetta Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 1:08 PM
Thank you Janice, I appreciate your stopping by. :)Paulette
Poet Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Congratulation on your contest wins with this perfectly penned poem, Paulette. Blessings and hugs
Calasibetta Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 1:08 PM
Thank you Lasaad, I always appreciate your comments. Blessings, Paulette
John Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 3:23 AM
Ah, the idea of a day-long morning!
Calasibetta Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 1:09 PM
Yes, indeed....wouldn't it be nice~peace and serenity all day through. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette
Buhagiar Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 1:35 AM
May your wish be achieved. We need joy in this turbulent world.
Calasibetta Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 3:51 AM
Thank you Victor for stopping by to comment~and yes, peace would be welcome in this 'turbulent' world. :)Paulette
Rose  Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 3:45 PM
Dear friend, if only morning could last and hold us in joy for the entire day, somehow your poem touches my soul, win win wishes xo
Calasibetta Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 3:48 AM
Hi Vie, so glad you enjoyed this~your comment touches my soul! XO P
Fowler Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 10:05 AM
First and last lines perfectly paired. Nicely done Paulette! Linda
Calasibetta Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 3:49 AM
Thank you Linda~glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette
Romios Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 9:45 AM
Wow,Paulette,this is so perfect, Your first two lined grabbed me. Such imagery, throughout A sure winner, this is, My best to you Love..Panagiota xxx
Calasibetta Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 3:50 AM
Panagiota, thanks so much for your complimentary comments. Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
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