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If Only I Could

I know some deep pain saddens you. It has been nesting in your heart for long. Breeding in the silence of your soul It leaves furrows on your brow. It intensifies with every deepening night. Leaving the wound in your heart severely bleeding Something that you don’t want to divulge, Robbing all your cheer and ebullience away. I can feel the smoldering of your heart. How I wish I could fan away those aches. Wipe off all the gloom from your mind, Or at least share a bit of it, my dear! Even when you wear a mask impenetrable, You might wonder how I know it. Is it telepathy that I can read your thoughts? Sense the rising palpitations of your heart? When I see your struggle to cover up your pain And put on a smile that is not genuine, How I wish I could alleviate your pain, Staying by your side, wiping those tears away. Though far, please know I am quite near. Somewhere so close, round the corner. I am with you as an unseen presence, Praying for you ever and wishing you all good. Life is strange with sudden twists and turns. Sometimes we feel we have come to a cul de sac. But never lose hope, any time there can be a turn around. It’s often after a bleary night, comes the bright morn. Again, the sun shall show up in the East. Darkness will recede and light shall descend. The meadows with dew drops shall shine. And the woods with the song of birds will resonate. How I wish to be staying close to you, To douse the heat of your anguished soul, And tell you in assured tone and timbre, That I shall be with you ever, if only I could! April.15.2023 ~ Placed First~ This or That. Vol.17. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Edward Ibeh

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Date: 4/28/2023 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "If Only I Could" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed day/weekend................
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Date: 4/28/2023 4:35:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this magnificent poem, Valsa:-) I didn't expect anything less.
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Date: 4/28/2023 9:53:00 AM
So far it has been a pleasure taking part in your contests, dear Edward. Thanks for the placement given and the opportunity you provide to excercise our creativity
Date: 4/16/2023 12:00:00 PM
Valsa, your reassuring words are very priceless and relaxing. Emotional language has an influence. "How I wish I could fan away those aches. Wipe off all the gloom from your mind, Or at least share a bit of it, my dear!" Without a question, outstanding poetry, my friend. Excellent sympathetic reading. From the first to the last verse, you had my full focus. Blessings.
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Date: 4/15/2023 7:54:00 PM
If I'm a woman, then -- O, how I wish you could be here to soothe my nerves as well, Valsa. Thank you for your exceptional empathy... If I'm a man, then -- Would you leave me alone and let me crawl back into my 'man-cave?!' ~ Men are from Mars; Women are from Venus (Ever read it?! -- Great insights!) Oh, btw: lovely phrase poem you've written here Valsa. Thanks, gw
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Date: 4/15/2023 9:38:00 PM
I thought I should comment on your comment. Even though you are a man and need to be comforted, definitely I will be there to comfort you in ways I can and never let you languish in your 'man cave' :) I can never discriminate. Thank you for your wonderful comment, dear Gershon.
Date: 4/15/2023 6:40:00 PM
Hi Valsa; quite an ending. We can promise to be with loved ones forever, and if one believes in Spirit Immortal maybe we can. Certainly sensing one another over great distances is a positive sign. I believe in telepathy...have had amazing experiences in my life that defy conventional science. I'm a believer. Wonderful sensitive read. Captured my attention from the get-go. Blessings. Great contest entry!
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Date: 4/15/2023 9:45:00 PM
I too have bit of a telepathy. If something is troubling my dear ones, especially my children though they are away, I grow very uneasy during those days. Must be some divine spark within us gives such insight. This has happened not once or twice but many a time. Thanks a lot Joe for your lovely comment
Date: 4/15/2023 6:16:00 AM
Heartfelt poem, Valsa. Highly emotive words make an impact. No doubt a winning poem my friend.
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Date: 4/15/2023 9:49:00 PM
Yes, it is a heartfelt poem, once written in all earnestness to comfort a friend in deep blues. Thanks a lot Vijay for your lovely observation and analysis
Date: 4/15/2023 12:30:00 AM
recomforting words are so precious for friends, thanks for sharing, hope ( she, he) will read
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Date: 4/15/2023 1:11:00 AM
Yes, we all look for comforting words when we are down. Thank you dear yaan
Date: 4/14/2023 11:34:00 PM
This is so wonderful and soothing Valsa - I'm reading it after not posting my poems from last night because they were all trauma driven and I just didn't feel able to share them anymore. So reading your poem, I just let myself forget it wasn't to me personally and let it land as if it was and it was very beautiful to absorb in that way. Thank you for sharing your personality in your poems Valsa, I feel honoured and privileged to be able to observe from afar what a lovely lady you are
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Date: 4/15/2023 1:10:00 AM
Dear friend, glad I could make you happy with my poem when you have been in a sullen mood. Poems can lift our moods. Sometimes, our poems may be trauma driven. That too will have a cathartic effect. So don't hesitate to post your poem. In fact I had written this sometime ago to pacify one of my friends.... in all earnestness. With some modification, i have entered it for the contest. Thank you DD for your kind words
Date: 4/14/2023 10:17:00 PM
Superb !
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Date: 4/15/2023 1:03:00 AM
I feel you really mean it. That one word is enough to make my day. Thanks a lot dear Wendy

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