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If not for the breeze, life would end Likewise for yonder sun To God’s love, let our ego bend Seeming many, all one Just be still and listen Feel glowing heart glisten Truly, we have risen There would be no trees If not for the breeze 21-September-2021 Quietus

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Date: 9/21/2021 6:20:00 AM
I feel the glowing heart! Great message.
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Date: 9/21/2021 6:44:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay
Date: 9/21/2021 1:29:00 AM
I consider this one of the nest.
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Date: 9/21/2021 3:27:00 AM
Thanks Victor! This is praise from Caesar indeed! :)

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