If Love As Eternal As a Mole

why would we doubt 
the existence of immortality

will love be eternal ?

perhaps we lost track of time
immersed in selfish ambition
hypnotized in beauty
floated above the charm

try to ask the mirror
who always tell the truth 

do we have
remained the same?
will get forehead wrinkles
eyebrows and eyelashes will change its colors

mirror said

“there is one point
unchanged
a mole ...
yes, a mole 
Likely to grow 
bigger
but never shrink or lost
it remained immortal”

how wonderful
if love
as eternal as a mole

try to ask the universe
what is immortal thing in the world
Nature doesn’t has a mirror

nature says
all was measured by the reflection science
what was seen in the reflection of the water
different from the original
what was appeared on the shadow
different from the original

nature says
“there is one point
unchanged
a mole ...
yes, a mole 
reflected by any object
remains the same
a mole
remains timeless

if love
as eternal as a mole

~ (c) Sukmawati Komala ~
18 April 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/20/2013 9:27:00 AM
Yes. At eighteen years of age I had this small mole. At 83 it is still there and is the first thing I see in the mirror in my morning toilet. I will think of immortality the next time I look in the mirror, thank you. Love, daver
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Date: 4/18/2013 4:38:00 AM
We spend too much time doubting ..... Live life under the sun and the rain, be happy every day we get. - A very well written poem Sukmawati. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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