If I Weren'T Afraid

If I weren't afraid, I'd break out of my castle
out of my gilded throne, out of my head tiara.
I'd break out of marble floors and tiled walls
out of this cold linoleum of grand opulence. 
Breaking out of embroidered blue flowers.
Breaking out of crappy  fluttering voices. 
Into that open field  of cherry blossoms 
Into those flossy clouds of chattering birds.
Into misty mountains of icy north winds
Into  stormy seas where gallant waves rush.
Into cooled sands wet in delightful soft kiss.     
Into solace of graffiti, a rock in love's bliss. 


Baby bats within caves of hidden treasure 
No longer afraid to lose all unknown.  
No longer afraid of what might happen.
No longer afraid of what world will say. 
No longer afraid of starlights in sky.
No longer afraid of freedom, 
No longer afraid to live... 
No longer afraid to die.




Dated 10th September 2019
Sponsor	Line Gauthier
Contest Name	IF I WEREN'T AFRAID

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/21/2019 9:00:00 PM
Debjani, congratulations on your placement in the contest, wonderful !
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Date: 9/20/2019 8:38:00 PM
I enjoyed reading and congratulate you on your winning entry. Many blessings to you
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Date: 9/20/2019 5:44:00 PM
wonderfully styled. THis one was very enjoyable to read. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 9/10/2019 3:27:00 AM
If I only wasn't afraid...an inspiring poem
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Date: 9/10/2019 12:55:00 AM
"Breaking out of crappy fluttering voices. Into that open field of cherry blossoms " Beautifully done.
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