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If I were immortal, What would life look like to me? Would I be at peace with Knowing my soul would never part from my flesh? When I've done all there is To do in this world, When I have Nothing more to give, Would the earth be my suffocating cage And I a bird forever trapped inside it? How terrifying would life be, if at all? Would I wear my immortality Like a badge of honor? Would I feel powerful? Would I ever tire of it Physically, mentally, And psychologically? Do I eventually long to escape life So desperately That I bargain with God To turn me into a mortal being? Given the absolute certainty That all living things Ineluctably die; Loss of loved ones and close friends, Departing to the afterlife While I'm trapped On earth in perpetuity. How unbearable The unceasing loneliness? Only God knows. If I were immortal And he scoffs at my ardent pleas To become mortal, I'd permanently become, I guess, A local caped superhero? If I Were Immortal Poetry Contest Sponsored by Anoucheka Gangabissoon Date written: 04/23/2022

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Date: 5/1/2022 2:32:00 AM
This poem has such sound philosophy, and is penned perfectly.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/1/2022 6:37:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Caren:-)
Date: 4/24/2022 5:43:00 AM
Trapped in perpetuity is exactly how I would feel and would have to plead to return me to mortality... excellent write, Edward. Deserving of a TOP win in the contest.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/24/2022 8:46:00 AM
Thank you very much for the vote of confidence, Vijay:-)
Date: 4/24/2022 4:57:00 AM
How we think alike .... ! I too have expressed almost the same thoughts and the same fears on this given topic ! But definitely I enjoyed your poem better ! Best of luck in the contest Edward !
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/24/2022 8:44:00 AM
Indeed, we do! Thank you very much and best of luck as well, Valsa:-)

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