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If I Were An Oscar Meyer Donut

If I were an Oscar Meyer donut Living in a Pacific Island hut I’d be sweet and sincere And drink all your light beer Scruffy beach bum sugar hair like a mutt.

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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 12/20/2019 7:32:00 PM

Not sure what thr last line means, Caren? Do you mean scruffy or sruffy? Maybe it's just a spelling mistake. Good limerick. / M

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2019 10:13:00 PM

I meant scruffy. Thank you for catching this! I must have skipped spell check!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/20/2019 12:34:00 PM

Oh bravo! Super limerick that has my sides splitting again.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/20/2019 2:37:00 PM

I am so glad you are reading my stuff today! Your comments have made my Friday so much better! And it was already good!