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If I Were An Elephant

Of all the mammals living on the land,
the elephant is largest of that kind.
But if I were an elephant, I’d show
the largest also were my heart and mind!

If I could be this beast, here’s what I know:
I’m not some made-up Dumbo that can fly.
I socialize; I grumble, and I need
a jumbo size of tissues when I cry!

My hearing is superb, but did you know
that I can even listen with my feet?
I put my trunk down by my feet and hear
vibrations, and that’s one astounding FEAT.

It’s obvious I’m strong. My trunk alone
has forty-thousand muscles, and guess what?
I’ll wrap my trunk around you, for BIG LOVE
means I’ll be giving great big hugs a LOT.

I cannot see too well. Nor can I jump,
but with my padded feet, I softly walk,
I am so skilled, for peanuts I won’t work!
But first I need to teach myself to talk!

Because if I can talk, I’ll speak out for
my fellow elephants endangered by
the foolishness and cruelty of those
who harm us when we’re in such short supply!

We’re also more than stunts inside a tent.
And though our skin’s as thick as an old shoe,
we have compassion, and we mourn our dead.
As feeling creatures, we should have rights too!

Now even though we elephants are huge,
and probably I weigh at least a ton,
I love to laugh and play! Climb on my back
and take a ride. You’ll see that I am fun.

I hope you see that I’m a lot like you.
So take care with your fat jokes around me
because it’s very true what people say.
I now have got amazing memory!

12/10/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Austin Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 12:26 PM
If you were a Hindu you might wish to be an elephant and actually become one on rebirth. I wonder if elephants write their own kind of poetry. They seem to be capable, of so many other things. Lots of fun with this one, Andrea. Love, daver
La France Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Andrea, I love your elephant poem and your images are delightful , it is a winner to me, please visit mine as it has a great image of a baby elephant~
Martin Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Lots of fun facts and a great poem! A wildlife documentary compressed into a few stanzas. Like it! Best of luck in the contest! :-)
Walker Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 7:04 AM
You have a wonderful way of putting facts and information on your topics into your poetry. I have often thought of how they mourn their dead and how they form a group and keep each other safe. We should learn from them about the family group and how much they care for each other.
Godwin Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 6:35 AM
I collect elephants because early on I was intrigued by these immense, super strong creatures who decidedly live in gentle peace. They are smart and care for each other. Your poem does my favorite mammal much justice, you have used fact to creatively describe much of why I love them. To me, this contest was a muse challenge, but you nailed it. Did you know I can imitate elephants' sound? Of course you didn't. It is one of my few talents and so useful ... CayCay
White Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 11:33 PM
I don't enter this elephant contest exactly for this reason... It makes me so sad, and it makes me angry (sometimes) to be human. Your quatrains are wonderful, the content is even better. Good luck in the contest.
Allison Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 6:59 PM
Such incredible personification Andrea ... I know you spend so much time researching and crafting your poems.. very good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Ogundare Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Elephants really amaze me, their size and memory capacity... I think humans should start giving them credibility...they're awesome creatures. You did justice to this Andrea. #7
Ball Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 12:58 PM
Exceptional piece teaching the sensitivity of another species. People tend to think that animals live only to eat, sleep and breed and have no feeling. |Totally wrong. Animals feel everything to the tenth degree. They remember and know more about love and loyalty than we do. Great job and a 777 from me. God Bless, JB PS Love the pics.
Nusker Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Oh Andrea, you spoke on their behalf so well. Very appealing. Loved it.
Mccoy Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 9:58 AM
Elephants are a fascinating creature. Beautiful and majestic. They can be fierce or gentle. They make great pets if you have a large yard, and they don't eat much... really! :)
Kannan Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Wow... Such a beautiful personification on elephants...Very informative... Learned many new things today...Thanks for sharing... Good luck with the contest... A Big 7...
Y. Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 6:51 AM
Hi Andrea, I agree with Victor, you've penned personification. It was as though the elephant was speaking. Well done. It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 6:00 AM
Very lovely, Andrea. Keep up the good work.
Sathasivam Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 1:59 AM
Great image of write. Well penned. All the best for the contest. Thanks for sharing it.
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