If I Were

If I were a toilet my seat would always be down for you If I were a bath tub I would always be hot for you If I were your blanket I would keep you warm at night If I were a mirror you would see your beautiful refection in me If I were a door I would always open my heart for you If I were a roof I would keep you dry If I were a fireplace I would give you romance If I were your foundation I would give you strength If I were your clothes, I would not let you wear me If I were your husband all this would be yours Will you marry me?

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Alexis Y.

Date: 12/18/2018 8:07:00 PM

That was the most touching and heartfelt proposal I have saw. It was just overflowing with that down to earth type of love from start to finish. Whom ever you wrote this for had to say yes. I know if my beau had written this for me, I would have said yes in a heartbeat:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/18/2018 8:29:00 PM

She will love it.

Bobby May
Date: 12/18/2018 8:13:00 PM

Thank you Alexis, that really touches my heart! I am saving it for someone special my friend